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A dream come ture
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 Created on 7-4-07
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Author's note this is not about me i just made it up. Hope you like it!!
Hey my name is Elsie, yeah I know it's wierd. It was my greatgrand mothers name. But let me tell you why my life changed when I met a guy over summer vacation.
I was at the beach with two of my bestfriends, Alex and Alexa i know it's confusing but you can deal with it. Ok this is my story...
"El do you see the hotties over there?" Alexa said with her sunglasses down on her nose.
"Oh yeah I see the guys who thinks the girls should go over to them and have us work insted of the other way around. They don't look so hot but if you think so you go and talk to them."
"Aww come on come with me? Please!!!"
"Alexa she doesn't have to go if she doesn't want to." Alex said as he was eyeing the girls that were lying next to us. Alexa got up and went to work. About an hour or two later she comes back with this look on her face.
"Ohmygosh!! El you will not belive this, I've been talking to the guys over there for like ever. And the guys aren't even intersted. The hottest one over there i was flirting with said he didn't like me but he liked you! Can you belive that? Then he starts to ask me questions about you-"I cut her off...."Whoa Alexa did you just say you talked about me with mr. snobe?"
"Well yeah" I looked behind Alexa and saw that teh guy she was talking about was staring right at me. I quickly turned away. "well what is his name?"
"His name is Andrew Williams."
"Ok but I'm not going out on a date with him."
"Well lets just go talk to him..Please?!?!"
Author's note: Please tell me if you like it....Rate and comment. There is more to the story just tell me if you like it so far.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On November 16th 2007 edwardlover92 Said: |
| I like it, keep me posted |
| On July 28th 2007 JWalker2406 Said: |
| It could use a bit more description, but its pretty good :) Keep me posted! |
| On July 5th 2007 jdwluver Said: |
| aww it is a great story so far great begining. keep me posted. |
| On July 5th 2007 Baillie010 Said: |
| awww this is really good! :) keep me posted! |
| On July 4th 2007 lvm3932 Said: |
| i like it say more nxt time ...plese keep me posted |
| On July 4th 2007 lvm3932 Said: |
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| i like it say more nxt time ...plese keep me posted |
| On July 4th 2007 hippppoo101 Said: |
| hey its pretty good so far and i liek it plz keep me posted |
| On July 4th 2007 BiAnIcole Said: |
| aweee yeappp yeappp i love itt = ] keep going |
| On July 4th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said: |
| yeah it is good...lemme know when the next part is up |
| On July 4th 2007 iloveyouu1609 Said: |
| pretty good so far. =]]] keep me posted. |
