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Knife
Tragedy
 Created on 7-13-08
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It was done. He’d done it after daring himself to do so for week’s maybe even months. He’d found this little girl in the street.
"Hello there you look lost” he’d said.
"I am I was playing with my friends but they left me and i don’t know my way home” she’d said with a whimper.
"Oh dear tell you what I’ll take you home don't you worry” he’d soothed. So he took her by the hand and walked up a street.
"Can you help me?" she'd suddenly said.
"I am" he'd replied. He took her up an alley.
"Can you help me?" she'd said again.
"Oh I’ll help you alright!" he'd whispered sinisterly. She was shaking now her eyes were big round marbles. He took out the knife he'd been concealing in his coat and without waiting for a breath he slit her neck her body slid to the floor limp and lifeless. He felt powerful for some strange reason but he liked the sensation. He shoved her body in a dumpster and ran to his van. Once inside he took out the knife to clean it but the blade was clean he didn't make a big deal of it.
now here we are he started up his van but something caught his eye in the back of his van he looked around but nothing was their .suddenly their was a dramatic change in temperature.....
"can you help me?” the words lingered in the van. He froze. The voice came from his passenger seat he turned towards it.
There she was the girl. The girl he had just murdered but she was a pale pasty white and their was no slit marks on her neck not even a nail print. she turned her head slowly towards him
"you said you'd help me .you said you'd take me home” she said.
"I......I’m sorry that’s just who I am.” he stuttered.
"Should I help you?” she asked.
"Wh....what how can you help me? Do what you can to help me please.2he begged. Her eyes turned cold.
"I will help you don't you worry about that” she smiled but this smile wasn’t friendly. She darted like a knife but before he could react a piercing pain punctured his heart. He looked down the girl was holding the handle of a knife the handle of the knife he'd used to kill her. He felt it the blade of the knife was inside him.
"This is what you’re like” she cackled. He looked into her eyes the last thing he ever saw for he died the same death as the girl.
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Please Login to post comments| On August 7th 2008 quizgirlton Said : | |
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Wow. I like it. I am one for horror though I don't write many. U R a good writier |
| On August 6th 2008 barbarian1 Said : | |
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woa... verry interesting, i think you write verry well and i enjoy the way the story was told |
| On July 22nd 2008 Akatsuki13 Said : | |
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Very good ^_^ |
| On July 14th 2008 MegluvsAv Said : | |
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awsum. |
| On July 13th 2008 kalenna4 Said : | |
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That was sad |
| On July 13th 2008 MomoHoshi456 Said : | |
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gory me likey |
