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The Letters - Chapter 04

Creative Created on 2-25-08 Views(185) Story Rating G

"Mr. Daniels," the nervous voice of a balding middle-age man spoke out. Gagent stood and walked over to him. "Your mother is stable, she should be fully recovered after a few days rest. There was no serve damage." Gagent gave the doctor a nod.

At a hospital, not to far from home, Gagent's mother laid, battered and bruised. The result of a drunken altercation with his father. The usual scenerio would be dead beat dad comes hom from the bar, completely lit and the slighest case of defiance cause a puch fest. But in Gagents case, this wasn't so typical. Gagent's mother was the issue. A recovering alcoholic, at least, she was. But when the news of Gagent's father's plan to marry his girlfriend broke way to her, she fell off more than just 'the wagon'. A confrontation ensued and because of her intoxication, a false step caused her to tumble down the front porch of Gagent's father's home.

As Gagent made his way into the hospital room. The look of complete disappointment flooded his face.
"Don't look at me like that," his mother hissed, "You look just like him."
"Why do you keep doing this mom?"
"I'm tired of you people always trying to tell me how to live my life!"
"You people? I'm your son!" Gagent spat. "I can't do this anymore." Gagent began for the door.
"Should have known when your father ran out on us that one day so would you!"
"He didn't run out on us, mom." Gagent began, "Cause let's face it, you had ran out long before he ever thought about leaving."
With that, Gagent let the room. Blocking out his mother's voice, repeatedly calling out his name. As he rounded the corner it was out of sight, out of mind.

Gagent walked into the waiting room where his father and little brother, Nicholas, waited.
"She all right?" His father questioned. Gagent nodded.
"They're going to keep her over night. So if you could take Nicholas, I'm just going to go over to a friends for the night.
"You sure you don't want to come home?" His father asked.
"I just think I need to be away for awhile. Besides, this and Mark.... Its just a bit to take in." Gagent confessed.
"All right, Gage." His father nodded, "I'm sorry to hear about Mark. He was a great kid."
"Yeah... I'll see you later Nic, all right?" Nic nodded. "Call me, if you need me."
Gagnet made his way out of the hospital. Truth was he didn't really have anywhere to go. He just knew he couldn't go home. Didn't want to go home.

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On February 29th 2008 ellies15 Said :
ellies15 naww
On February 27th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood awww i like Gagnet too...he's cool
On February 26th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 good!
On February 26th 2008 Equasha Said :
Equasha preety hug plz keep me posted
On February 26th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX I love your story. It's awesome. Please keep me posted!
On February 26th 2008 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 love it
On February 26th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen love it!!!
keep me posted!!
On February 26th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said :
gotmilk1994 great!!! kmp can't wait for the rest!!! =]=]
On February 25th 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 AMAZiNG!! KMPP!
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On February 25th 2008 melibeans10 Said :
melibeans10 cant wait until they all get togther with the letters..KMP!!
On February 25th 2008 pellagirl933 Said :
pellagirl933 omg...i love this! it is awesome! please keep meposted!
On February 25th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz i too, agree with punckdancr. i cant wait until the story really begins! please keep me posted:]P
On February 25th 2008 Melanie82092 Said :
Melanie82092 i dont really like the name gagent its weird i like just gage better but ne way keep me posted!!!!!!!!!
On February 25th 2008 BiAnIcole Said :
BiAnIcole veryyyy awesome =]=]=]=] love it =]=] cant wait for the rest!!! keep me posted as usual!!
On February 25th 2008 melissabik Said :
melissabik it's good so far, but it's so short! I wish they were longer. i really like it though
On February 25th 2008 brokenwings122 Said :
brokenwings122 I agree with punkdancr, this is a great way to introduce the characters, but I'm getting antsy to have the real story start
On February 25th 2008 taraluvsbama06 Said :
my picture
im lost. kmp
On February 25th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 I like it. kmp
On February 25th 2008 cursedxisxwhat Said :
cursedxisxwhat getting goood. kmp.
On February 25th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s AWWWWWWW kmp!!
On February 25th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said :
xPunkxVanityx love it so far! Please keep me posted!
On February 25th 2008 punkdancr Said :
punkdancr nice...kmp...can't wait for the story to really get going!