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"the long road home" part 1

"the long road home" part 1

Other Created on 11-3-07 Views(137) Story Rating G

Slowly back the car away, its pouring outside and im not  sure what to do. Steady breathing i know im going to get caught, if i dont drive away from this scene. I just can't, i regret everything i've done tonight, i didn't do it on purpose. I never planned for this to happen, it just did. I went on an endless rage, im just so sick of my life. I can't beleive i took it out on them. I can hear sirens in the distance, maybe someone heard the screams. Sitting in the car, my head rested on the wheel, i can hear a car pull up to mine. I know her, shes my best freind, i can't believe shes here. I need to tell her everything, i need to get everything off my chest, maybe a hug too. To make me feel good before my heart sinks to the words, "youv'e got life in prison"  i couldn't stand hearing that. Im opening the car door, and there she is, shes found out what iv'e done. And i know theres not much time left."i'm sorry" i say, saying "yeah" in return i know she hates me. I didnt kill anyone she knew and loved, just some random human being on the side of the road."hey", being sucked back into a cold cold reality, im in a jail cell, alone i must add, and i get one phone call. Im not sure if i should call my freind, or maybe my mother, i know she hates me so much. The phone rings endlessly and i hear a silent "hello" i know shes there im going to tell her everything ive felt before, why ive done it, and just a thanks for being there. But i cant seem to speak, my mouth is dry and were in an awkward silence, my time on this phone is almostup and as the prison guard pulls me away, i say "i love you". Im thrown back in my jail cell all alone its past dark and ive only got 24 days left until execution day. Closing my eyes i remember everything that happened that night....I'm still in the car, after she just arrived, shes stands there impatiently in the rain.the light from the car makes it hard to see her expression, but i know shes sad as hell. "hey, are the cops coming?" i ask her, a while after she plays with the dirt with her shoe impatiently, and says "yeah". "hey, where are you going?" " im leaving you hilary, your a bad person, i cant see why i was even frends with you, were through, don't ever talk to me again." i look down at the floor of the car, ive got tears in my eyes, and i know this sounds like a meaningless break up between a boy and a girl but she was just always there for me, i dont know how i'll go on. As the car backs away, i take the knife i used on innocent souls and i slit my wrist so deep that theres blood everywhere now, and my visions blurred and so much pain. i collapse to the ground, with the last thing i hear are  very sirens close to me car doors slam shut, and the steady walking, i know theyre coming for me.

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On November 21st 2007 loveXafterXall Said :
loveXafterXall wow, amazing story, thumbs up
On November 7th 2007 yorkiedude27 Said :
yorkiedude27 i really like this whoa i like felt the pain creepy
On November 6th 2007 edwardlover92 Said :
edwardlover92 oo keep me posted this is real good
On November 5th 2007 firerocket67 Said :
firerocket67 wow, its amazing. You have a very active imagination, keep up the good work, and be damn sure you keep me posted when you get more up!
On November 5th 2007 assumetheworst Said :
assumetheworst damnit im sorry >.< guess id better space ou chapter 2 :/
On November 5th 2007 KAMart Said :
KAMart i coundnt read it cos its like not spaced out
On November 4th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 really good, keep me posted...
On November 4th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 really good, keep me posted...
On November 4th 2007 twilightx28 Said :
twilightx28 Sounds interesting enough. I doo have to agree with jennaferz though. Try not to do one whole paragraph. Keep me posted??
On November 3rd 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz omg..this is so good. {{if i could suggest not making it all one paragraph? it makes it really hard to read.}} but i loveee the plot!
On November 3rd 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 oh wow continue it is good