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Moving On Without Hope Chap. 1
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 Created on 10-30-07
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"Help Me Jess" Please Help! thats the last words my best friend Hope would ever say to me. I hear those words everyday. They say it's not my fault that there was nothing I could do to help her. She was too deep in the ocean. Let me start by telling you the beggining from the first day I met her. It was first grade I had just moved to Missouri all the way from California. My parents were getting a divorce so she moved my younger brother and baby sister to the place she grew up. Kansas City, Missouri . I was leaving everything behind my school, playmates and most of all my daddy. That was a hard thing for a eight year old to understand. I didnt get why my parents did not want to live together anymore none of my friends parents split up. When I was older I found out daddy was creeping on Mama with this little 19 year old intern at his job and " why he always had to work late" Anyhow we moved and I didnt like it one bit. The first day of school Mama had to force me to go. I was in the second grade and my brother was in kinergarden. Mama said " Now Jessica dear it wont be so bad your meet new friends" I mumbled I dont want no new friends" My mama didnt take back talking and said What was that? Nothing Mama? So there I was in the principals office why Mama was filling out papers and stuff. And then the principal Mrs. Martinez took me to my class in room 124. She was really nice still I didnt let my gurard down. She guided me into the room and I met my teacher Ms. Johnson. Ms. Johnson said to the class everyone this is Jessica she moved her all the way from LA California. Then she assigned my my seat and that when I met her. She was a little old thing with long blond hair and green eyes. She said hi I'm hope. I couldnt not intoduce myself so I said Hi I'm Jessica but you can call me Jess. I dont know why but she really lifted my spirits. That day we became the best of friends. Ate lunch together, Played togethe when people referred to us it was always Jess And Hope. We were at each others houses so much that our parents always asked if they should have an extra spot and the dinner table. They were there for each other when they had boy trouble, parent trouble and periods. They were like sisters. Now in there junior year of high school Hope and her family were vistening Florida and invited Jess along. They were so excited. They were having so much fun in Florida. They just had to try there hot little bikinis on and go for a swim. The ocean was pretty empty. They were having a blast slashing each other be crazy like always. Then Hope says see the deep end over there. Jess said Yeah the part that were not allowed to go in. Hope replied well watch me. Jess begged her not too that was very deep and dangeorus. But dear devil Hope didnt listen and he went in and first it was easy to swim in but just as she was about to swim back to where Jess was. Some big waves came and knocked her under she couldnt get back up and she was choking on water. She called for Help but there was nothing that anyone could do and Jess had to watch her best friend since the first grade drown to death..........
Next chapter is about Hope's funeral and how the fact that shes really gone hits Jess like a ton of bricks please comment so I will know if it's a good enough story to continue
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Please Login to post comments| On October 31st 2007 CaPlanePourToi Said : | |
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| On October 31st 2007 CaPlanePourToi Said : | |
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It's good. My only critique is make paragraphs! It's much easier to read. |
