A Loving Dream

I'm walking down the blank, empty hall of school. The hall is swallowed up by darkness ahead. I pass each and every gray locker, feeling watched and disturbed. It carries on for what seems like an unending odyssey. It becomes darker and daker as I walk further and further. What is the meaning of this?

 After what seems longer than forver, I see a radiant and sharp light shining down the hall. My eyes squinted automatically and my empty heart was filled with hope. I raced toward the light, not taking my eyes off of it.

I step into the light only to reveal a figure. I stared in awe at this unknown boy. His charming smile, his wavy blond hair, bulging muscles, and compassionate eyes were heavenly. I took small steps towards him.

I reached out and stood between what were his outstretched arms. He slowly closed his arms tightly around me. I felt the warmth of his body and never wanted the moment to end. He brught his arms up and held my shoulders. I looked up into his sweet, loving hazel eyes. I was smiling greatly. He slowly leaned in on me. Suddenly, I heard the ringing of the alarm clock. I opened my eyes. I sat up in bed.

"What a loving dream...if only it were true."

This is my first story, so I would appreciate some comments and advice on how to improve. Hope you liked it! <3