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Gone (prologue)

Gone (prologue)

Horror Created on 6-19-08 Views(135) Story Rating G

In the little town of Richardmoss there was a killer on the loose. All the people were worried. Nothing this big had happened since the killing spree of ‘72. Lily and Max Blackstone just got married. Lily graduated from high school 7 months ago. She gave birth to Kelly Blackstone six months ago. About two weeks ago a list was found. It had twelve names on it. The first eight people on the list had a line through each name. They were also found murdered, and placed back in their houses. The last four names were: Kathy McCarney, Lily Blackstone, Max Blackstone, and Kelly Blackstone. Last night Kathy McCarney was found face down in the pool at her house. Stabbed to death.

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On June 19th 2008 innersmiff Said :
innersmiff You seem to be racing along like nothing on Earth. You're just explaining the plot. If you are to keep going, make it slower and more suspenseful.
On June 19th 2008 anbo123 Said :
anbo123 Tell me what you think should I keep going or delete this?