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Together Forever?[20]{{Epilogue}} |
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And The Next Story I'm Writing Is... |
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New Stories-THE FINAL TWO! |
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New Story Ideas[[please vote! your vote will count!!]] |
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Just Friends[11] Justin's Point of View
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Justin’s Point of View
I think I was the only one who knew Anna needed help. There was no one in the house that night when she thought she had seen Michael. Michael had been dead for three years; he was killed in the war in Iraq and Anna knew that. So, why she said Michael was there was beyond me. I pointed to each street and led her to my new apartment. She smiled as she put the car in park and got out by herself. That’s something that hasn’t changed, I thought to myself. She’s still really independent.
“So this is it huh?” Anna said.
“Yup,” I replied, “it’s really nice, isn’t it?”
Anna nodded and walked to the door and looked back to me, her eyes saying ‘C’mon already.’ I walked up to the porch and dug my keys out of my pocket. I slowly unlocked the door and pushed it open, letting her go in first. Her eyes widened and she walked into the center of the kitchen. She spun herself around, laughing and her auburn hair swirling along with her. She stopped and smiled at me.
“I never been able to turn around in a kitchen without touching any counters,” she said, laughing excitedly.
I simply nodded and continued to show her through the rest of the house.
“It’s beautiful,” she exclaimed as she sat down on the white leather couch.
“Anna, we need to talk,” I demanded in a serious tone.
“Okay,” Anna whispered back meekly.
“I don’t want you to freak out. Just listen first okay?” I asked.
Anna nodded and I continued, “Anna, you were hallucinating again today; like you used to. Michael’s been dead for three years now. He wasn’t there and you two had made amends before he left for Iraq. Remember?”
Anna nodded. “I’m sorry Justin. I hate having to put you through this.”
“Have you been taking your medication?” I asked apprehensively. As I predicted, she exploded with anger.
“I’m not a little girl anymore!” she screamed. “My mom and Angie asked you to do this didn’t they? Sleep with me and get information?! Leave me alone!” And with that she stormed out of the living room and out of the apartment.
Great, I thought. Now what?
{Hey guys! I need advice for something to do with this story. I thought I had a plot planned out in my head but it went away faster than I expected! If you have an idea, message me please! Sorry it's so short. Like I said, I dont know where to go with it Thanks~Ana}
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| On April 6th 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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o and KMPP |
| On April 6th 2008 shadyishott Said : | |
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if u write the other part the way Crissysmiles said and add ur own twist shit it would be good ohhhhhh and ana gets pregnent with justin or brad or wat ever i just think it would be kewl for her to get pregnent =] |
| On March 8th 2008 Crissysmiles Said : | |
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I know what todo:
Make it that Brad comes back but he kills himself, butmakesitlook like justin and ana killedhime. They go to jail, and /ana stops completely takeing her pills, she thinks Justin killed brad because he didn't love her anymore [[which is oviously bull]].. justin keeps a diary of letters that are addressed to anna.. one day he gets killed ((by who and how have endless possibilities)) and their appeal trial is that day.. [[the guards goto look for him and find him deadd (suiside is a deffinate maybe)]] she is proven innocent...and the diary is given to her.. it's a leather journal tied with a hair ribbon she gave him when they were in the (2nd ect) grade. You can run with the rest. just message me with your oppinions on my idea (or add me on myspace)
:) GoodLuck! |
| On February 2nd 2008 fierygal2010 Said : | |
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i like this story! keep me posted... sry i don't have ideas for my own stories! lol |
| On January 31st 2008 gotmilk1994 Said : | |
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love the story kmp i love the halusination twist do some more of that stuff or maybe she can run away or something idk. |
| On January 13th 2008 CrazyGirlz25 Said : | |
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mood swings like me... :S Anyways, if u keep writing this story let me know.... really like it |
| On January 11th 2008 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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Kmpppp. love itt. |
| On January 11th 2008 monkey892 Said : | |
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damn she has mood swings kmp |
| On January 11th 2008 necrosiss Said : | |
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Rofl SHE has mood swingss. Idkk eitherr. :/ |
| On January 11th 2008 kg108551 Said : | |
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I'm not really sure... but I thought it was great! :P If u get any other ideas, keep me posted |
| On January 11th 2008 delaneyybabyy Said : | |
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idk i dont have any ideas sis |


