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Pheobe [intro]

Creative Created on 1-10-08 Views(83) Story Rating G

Pheobe was an only child, her mother had recently started dating a guy named Max and he had already moved in. Her mother had left her father when she was a few years old, she couldn't remember because it was so long ago. Now she was 15. She couldn't wait till she was 16 to get her lisence and drive far away because every night her mom came home high. Anyother time her mom was almost never home, that's when she was beat by Max. Pheobe had tried telling her mom that Max beat her, but her mom thought it was only for attention, sense she had never really given Pheobe any. Pheobe normaly had bruises all over her arms and legs, so even when it was summer she was stuck wearing pants and long sleeve shirts.

(Please comment and rate if you think i should keep writing this story. Thanks for reading.

P.S. This is not a real story i made it up!)

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On January 16th 2008 piratesrule78 Said: 
piratesrule78 i like it keep me posted
On January 11th 2008 ALICHELLA16 Said: 
ALICHELLA16 its pretty good, but you need more detail... kmp
On January 11th 2008 kg108551 Said: 
kg108551 I think it's pretty good! Keep me posted!