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Kidnapping Natalie (chapter 2)
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 Created on 6-3-07
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Note- this is my first story that I am writing thats more than like a chapter so when commenting be nice please =]
Natalie and Emily were laying on their sides at the back of the van as the two men in the front plotted what they were going to do next. The men exchanged looks of pure evil and laughter that would send shivers down your spine. But there was something about one of men in the front that seemed oddly familar. As soon as Natalie saw his face again she knew it. The guy in the front was none other than Ace Jordan aka Natalie's ex-boyfriend. He use to beat Natalie and at one point raped her. As Natalie's thoughts drifted they reached a warehouse where soon many bad things would take place...
Sorry this chapter isn't as long chapter 3 will come out sooner because of the shortness in chapter 2... =] =)
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Please Login to post comments| On July 23rd 2007 twilight023 Said : | |
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its good |
| On June 6th 2007 alyssafosho101 Said : | |
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If I get good feedback on this chapter and the first I will write chapter 3 but if I don't I won't write chapter 3 |
