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Kidnapping Natalie
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Natalie was a 15 year old girl and described as a slinder beauty with a body like a model. She had shoulder length bleach blonde hair and very defined features. She grew up with her parents in a small town in California. She loved her life because she had tons of friends and on the plus side she had no boyfriend so she could flirt with as many guys as she wanted.
It was a blistering hot summer day in July as she sat under the apple tree in her best friends front yard. She was waiting for Emily to get outside so they could go to the public pool that was just a couple blocks away. As she started to daydream Emily came out squeeling about how much fun they were going to have.
"OH MY GOSH!!! I can't wait to get down to the pool so I can see my boyfriend and show off my new bathing suit," shouted Emily in a very happy voice
"Well why are we still hanging around here?"asked Natalie
Natalie jumped up and grabbed her towl off the ground. As they were about to start walking Emily's cell phone started ringing. Natalie knew it was Emily's boyfriend and sighed because she was gonna see him soon anyway. But suprisingly Emily only took a few seconds. As soon as Emily put her phone away she burst into tears.
"Emily, did that boy break up with you? Because if he did I'll beat his ass!" she said with slight concern and anger.
"Yeah he said he thinks maybe we should just see other people," Emily said between every outburst of tears.
I quickly grabbed Emily as she collapsed into my arms crying so hard that I knew she truely was heartbroken.
"Come on girl let's go take a walk,"
"Ok."
As we started to walk I noticed a van slowly following behind us. I was breatheless when the guy in the back jumped out and grabbed me and Emily and threw us in the back of the van. He tied us up tight as he put us both at the back of the seatless van....
I will be writing chapter 2 very soon.
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| On July 23rd 2007 twilight023 Said : | |
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wow this is good |
| On July 8th 2007 lonchaney4ever Said : | |
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WoW its good hurry with the second part hehe |
| On June 3rd 2007 crytaline Said : | |
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keep me udated it good
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| On June 3rd 2007 beachparty57 Said : | |
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I like it alot i'd like to hear more! |
| On June 2nd 2007 alyssafosho101 Said : | |
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sorry if I spelled anything wrong |


