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Ariana walked down the old alley which was a short cut to her appartment. She knew that it was creepy, and dangerous but knew if she didn't get home soon she'd be in trouble. She clutched her purse beside her as she walked quietly. It was already getting dark and she was getting even more spooked. Just as Ariana was almost down the alley a man stepped out infront of her.
She took a step back away from the stranger as he proceeded towards her! She thought to herself, "No please don't let this happen." She started walking faster towards the other way and he picked up speed. She began to run but the heals she wore were hard to run in and she tripped!
"GET AWAY FROM ME!" she yelled as he grabbed her and pulled out duct tape. She began crying and kicking trying to escape but he was way to strong. He taped her up and then put tape over her mouth and picked her up like a rag doll. Tears poured down her face and she thought it was the end.
She knew she couldn't get away not but knew she could maybe peek and get to know how he looked. She turned her head and saw he was brown hair but thats all she saw before he yelled, "LOOK AND I'LL KILL YOU!" She closed her eyes and wimpered to herself.
He opened the door on an abandon ware house, she assumed thats what it was. She started kicking but it did no good, he threw her down on the floor and she tried to wiggle away. He kicked her and pains shot down her side and she truelly thought it was the end. He pinned her down and began pulling off her pants, "Struggle and i will kill you!" He waved a hand gun and she cried.
He then raped Ariana, the poor girl was only 13, and never even had sex. He hurt her extremely and she tried to struggle but he would yell and hold up the gun. He raped her for at least an hour but to her, it seemed forever. After he was done she had bleed alot and he pulled her into a back room which had a tub to wash her off, and his dna.
He filled the tub and threw her in her head hitting the edge and knocking her unconcious. Her last memory was of seeing his watch, it was 7 pm. She awoke up outside of the park. She began crying from the pain, and fear she looked around and saw he was gone, he most of dumped her here! She felt her head which was pounding and looked down below and her jeans were bloody.
She grabbed her purse beside her and saw that her cell phone was smashed, wallet with her adress in it gone, and a note from the guy. "I'll see you agian later on" She screamed out loud, "OH GOD NO!!!" she stumbled to her feet confused but collapsed began she was to weak. "Help me!" Ariana cried as lady was walking by she looked into the darkness and saw Ariana and ran towards her. "Oh my god, you poor child" she cried and called 911.......
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| On November 24th 2007 kelseyw68 Said : | |
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this story is most definatly one of the best..keep me posted please!! |
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WOW!!! PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED. VERY GOOD!!!!!!!!!!! |
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OMG..how sad. please keep me posted! |
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good. keep my posted. |
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i liek it kep me posted please :] |
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Eww! This is gross. You're very sick for writing such things. Ughh >=[ |
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