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Romance Created on 5-4-08 Views(577) Story Rating G

He walked on the grass towards me, as an evil grin gets bigger and bigger with every step he takes.  My eyes bulged out of my head as Gabe ran up to me and grabbed me by the waist and then jumped into the pool.  I didn’t realize what was going on until I was completely submerged under the water with Gabriel holding me.  My clothes feeling heavy on my body as I swam towards the surface, Gabriel dragging me up by my waist.  As I popped my head over the surface of the water I glared at Gabriel with evil eyes.  He gasped for breath as he treaded water with me, his hair covering his eyes making him look like a wet dog, but a cute wet dog.  He smiled at me as I moved my wet hair out of my own face, the ripples from the pool made us both bob up and down as the first stars started to come out and the streetlights began to come on.

 

“So Melody how’s the water?”  He said giggling as he splashed me.

 

“Ah, well it would be better if I had expected I would actually be going into the water.”  I said shivering.

 

“Oh your shivering, I hope the waters not to cold for you princess.”

 

“Gabe! The water’s freezing; it is almost the middle of winter.”

 

Gabriel began to swim closer to me, his arms slowly wrapping around me as he placed his right hand on the back of my neck.  He kissed me quickly then pulled away and looked me in the eyes as he still held on to me.

 

“The how ‘bout I warm you up?”  He didn’t give me time to answer before he pulled me closer and started to kiss me again, his hand wrapping around the hair at the base of my neck as we treaded water.  I was stunned as his lips moved with mine, I couldn’t move, I couldn’t breath, it was like the whole world had just fallen apart.  Was this really happening?   Was Gabriel really kissing me?  So much has happened today, it’s all so confusing.  First, this great looking guy comes to school today.  Then, we hang out and have the greatest time ever, and now we’re kissing in my pool.  How could all of this happen so fast?  I couldn’t think, the whole world was just turned up side down.  I began to feel light headed just when Gabriel had pulled away from me.  He had taken his hand off my neck and held on to me as I began to lose consciousness in the water.

 

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