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Can you keep a dirty little secret? (4)

Romance Created on 4-26-08 Views(473) Story Rating G

 

We drove into the parking lot of the small cafe. Gabe unfastened his seatbelt and briskly went around to my side of the car to open the door for me. He smiled as i stepped out.

"Right this way madam." He said closing the car door behind me. He is so sweet, I think I should really thank his parents for creating such a wonderful being.

"So what would you like to eat Melody, what ever you want it's on me."

"No, no I really can't take your money, anyways I owe you rember."

"Owe me? For what?"

"You saved me from having to spend the night with Leo!"

"Oh that. I was just being a good friend, that's what friend's do right?"

"Well yea I guess so but-"

"No but's. The case is closed, I'm buying you something to eat, I mean look at you, Your as thin as a stick."

"But I-"

"No but's." He said as he shook his head and pulled out the chair at a small rounded table.

"Okay." I gave in, He smiled his beautiful smile and then sat down at the table accross from me.

"So do you know what you want?"

"I guess I'll have a hot chocolate."

"Is that it?" He asked looking at me as if I was crazy.

"Yea that's it."

"Not even a dounut or something? I mean come on I'm paying, and you have the choice to have what ever you want."

"What ever I want, eh?"

"Yep. What ever you want."

Well a kiss would be nice. But then again so would a rolse royce.

"I want a hot chocolate."

He frowned and tilted his head downward giving me puppy dog eyes.

"Okay Okay and some wipped cream."

He laughed and got up to get my hot chocolate and what ever he had decided to get for himself.

He came back with my hot chocolate, over flowing with wipped cream on the top. His left hand held a blueberry muffin and a coffee.

"I made sure the guy at the counter gave you extra wipped cream."

"I can see." I said as I grabbed the hot chocolate and sipped at the foamy mess as Gabe sat down again and sipped his coffee.

"So maybe we should get started with those history notes you needed." I said as I took the notebook I brought with me out of my handy-dandy purse.

"What notes?"

"You know the ones you needed for History, You told Leo you had a test to study for."

"Oh those notes."

"Yea those notes."

"I don't need them, turns out there is no History quiz." He said smiling into his coffee cup.

"I see."

"oh really?"

"yea I see that you lied."

"But I thought that- I thought that- you ummm." He studered, baffled by my responce.

"Gabe it's okay I'm just joking. Thank you so much for saving me from Leo tonight, I don't know what I would have done with out you."

"Is he like your boyfriend or something?"

"Yea, my boyfriend."

"He seems like a jerk to me."

"He can be, But he's not that bad really."

"Well he defentally was to me. What do you see in him? He's not even that good looking." He giggled, sipping from his coffee cup, the steam rising around his face.

"Well he used to be really nice. I don't know he just changed I guess."

"Well he should treat you with more respect, no girl as pretty as you should be treated like a toy."

He thinks I'm pretty! Gabe called me pretty! Gabe! Gabe! Gabe! Gabriel thinks I'm pretty! gabriel thinks I'm pretty nananabooboo! Ohmygod! Did this perfect being just call ME pretty?!?!?

"Thanks." I managed to say with out screaming at the top of my lungs.

"I mean it your gorgeous. You should really dump that jerk and go out with someone who will treat you nicer."

"Like who?" I asked not believing what my ears were hearing.

"I don't know. Just someone nicer."

"Oh." I was disappointed he hadn't said "me". But what was I suppossed to expect that this wonderous person would ever want to be mine?

"Yea actually I was thinking,"

"Yea what?" I said my hopes raising again, Ohmygod.

"Well there's this party this weekend up at my cabin in New York, maybe you would like to come and meet some new people?"

"Yea that sound's cool." My Hopes crashing yet again.

 

 

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On June 9th 2008 CassieZ Said :
CassieZ lol nice
On May 27th 2008 TwilightFan977 Said :
TwilightFan977 hahaha, guys never take a hint... loveing the story good work!
On May 4th 2008 Beautifulett Said :
Beautifulett kmp please. this is really good
On April 28th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x Ooah! plz kmp!
On April 27th 2008 Sammybabe92 Said :
Sammybabe92 awsome job kmp
On April 27th 2008 TheBranster Said :
TheBranster No I can not
On April 27th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott okay im soooooo taking a guess and saying that he is a vampire [or vanpire wich ever one] he is everything a vam\npire should look like and he eats alot so like yeh KMPPPPPPPPPPP
-♥LISA♥
On April 27th 2008 LadyCha0s Said :
LadyCha0s sweet. kmp
On April 26th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood i love it!! you know what i think his secret is? i think he's gay! all the goodlooking ones are gay. sad but true. KMP!
On April 26th 2008 ALICHELLA16 Said :
ALICHELLA16 kmp please!
On April 26th 2008 cassiecat1221 Said :
cassiecat1221 kmp i wonder what his secret is???
On April 26th 2008 ilybaby06 Said :
ilybaby06 Oh god I love him lol.. KMP!
On April 26th 2008 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz i love it.(: i think that he's either too shy to tell her he likes her, or he's trying to protect her from his "dirty little secret."
he's sweet, though. i like him(:
On April 26th 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany Kmp
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On April 26th 2008 toxxicskank Said :
toxxicskank ohh kmpp
On April 26th 2008 lonely244444 Said :
lonely244444 KMP please!
On April 26th 2008 Snooky9e Said :
Snooky9e awww...he is so freakin sweet...i hope they hook up...kmp...
On April 26th 2008 upyours911 Said :
upyours911 Plz kmp!
On April 26th 2008 MZdaBoSs Said :
MZdaBoSs KMP!
On April 26th 2008 hglnj94 Said :
hglnj94 awwwww thts so cute! kmp!!!
On April 26th 2008 raetakeninluv1 Said :
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On April 26th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh i know that she will go and i think that she will find out his secret
On April 26th 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
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On April 26th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen keep me posted!!