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cyber vixen chapter 4
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That night I wasn't really in the mood to talk to anyone besides Justin. I don't know why but something about him was different then other guys I had talked too. Something about the way he talked or well I should say typed had a different appeal to it. For some reason when I talk to him I CAN't be some one else. I act like me, things that I would say are said, instead of things that my "other me's" would say. I think I might actually LIKE him.....
Sk8terpimp77: hey angela
alday4: hey justin!
sk8terpimp77: WOW! I got an exclamation point, that must mean something?
holy shit why the hell did I put an exclamation point OMG?!?!?!
alday4: NO! I guess I'm just hyper
sk8terpimp77: O okay so what's up
alday4: nothing much
sk8terpimp77: ahhh the usual
alday4: huh?
sk8terpimp77: EVERYONE says nothing much
alday4: OH I SEE!!!!
sk8terpimp77: yeah!! maybe I should say how was your day?
alday4: my day was BORING as hell!!!
sk8terpimp77: why is that?
alday4: oh well I went to school, and then had to run around for my cheer couch all day after school, to get the new uniforms.
sk8terpimp77: Your a cheerleader?
alday4: yea, didn't I tell you all the sports I play already?
sk8terpimp77: no but what ever
alday4: oh well I am on the soccer team and I run track and you already knoe that I am a cheerleader
sk8terpimp77: sorry but I have to say that's so fucking hot!
alday4: why thank you
sk8terpimp77: your welcome maybe you could send me a pic of you in your uniform, possibly bent over doggy style with no undies on?
alday4: Maybe
sk8terpimp77: Really! can you send them now?
alday4: Maybe means not yes and not no, why do you think I ment yes?
sk8terpimp77: awww IDK I just thought maybe, like I thought you ment to say something like maybe in like a sexy tone way, IDK just pretend I never said anything
alday4: maybe I was meaning to say maybe in a sexy tone way
s8terpimp77: What the hell are you talking about?!!
alday4: just never mind, I would send you a picture but........
sk8terpimp77: but what?
alday4: IDK would you send me a picture?
sk8terpimp77: of what?
alday4: hmmmmm IDK
sk8terpimp77: DO you want a pic of my dick?
alday4: What? why would you say that? maybe, possibly, IDK
a acceptence box pops up on my screenicture
alday4: what the hell is this picture of?
sk8terpimp77: maybe you should click it and find out
alday4: IDK
sk8terpimp77: just click on it
alday4: alright.......
I click accept and a picture, thank god, of a increadibly gorgouse guy pops up on my screen, OMG if this is justin I think I've fallin' in love he is is is...
alday4: holy shit is this you?
sk8terpimp77: lol yea, why you like?
alday4: maybe
hell yea hell yea!!!!!!!! OMG justin OMFG you are are are are, I'm speachless holy shit!!!!
sk8terpimp77: is a maybe a yes or no?
alday4: a maybe is a maybe
sk8terpimp77: awwww just tell me if you like me or not
alday4: Why should I?
sk8terpimp77: because I want to know
alday4: well sometimes we don't get what we want
sk8terpimp77: well maybe, I guess you don't want me to talk to you anymore
alday4: NO!!!!!!! please don't stop talking to me
sk8terpimp77: then tell me if you like me or not
alday4: I like you
sk8terpimp77: how much?
alday4: why do you need to know?
sk8terpimp77: I'm logging off........
alday4: no!!!!!!! don't I really really really like you, You are fucking SEXY as hell!!!!!!!!!
sk8terpimp77: LOL, that's all I wanted to hear
alday4: you know what justin?
sk8terpimp77: what?
alday4: your a bad word
sk8terpimp77: LOL, you know what angela?
alday4: what?
sk8terpimp77: your a good word
alday4: and what word would that be?
sk8terpimp77: perfect
alday4: don't make me laugh
sk8terpimp77: no seriously your perfect, your beautiful and funny, and just everything about you is perfect
alday4: but you don't know EVERYTHING about me how could you know that EVERYTHING about me is perfect
sk8terpimp77: IDK, I guess your right, but I would like to get to know more about you, I was just wondering if it would be okay If I maybe got your phone number.................
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| On February 16th 2008 TwilightFan977 Said : | |
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WHOA....0.o |
| On January 24th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On January 23rd 2008 vernathome Said : | |
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I like the whole concept of writing in chat text although I think that kind of abbreviated typing will lead to trouble down the road for everyone. Its like a second language. and may already be responsible for the number of misspelled words in your text. I would suggest you proof read your work more before posting. you work is very creative and I hope you continue to write and pay more attention to capitalization, punctuation and spelling. these things matter more than you may think when when you want to be taken seriously as a writer. EXCELLENT story line and good focus will take you along way, you have very promising potential. |
| On January 22nd 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmp please |
| On January 22nd 2008 Prqt2nv Said : | |
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kmp |
| On January 22nd 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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It's getting good. Please keep me posted. |
| On January 22nd 2008 analyssarenae Said : | |
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ooo its getting good! keep me pposted |
| On January 22nd 2008 X4packchickX Said : | |
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hah. cute. KMP, plz!n_n~Dott |
| On January 22nd 2008 monkey892 Said : | |
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ooo! kmp |
| On January 22nd 2008 lovelynatwolff Said : | |
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lolz. KMP |
| On January 22nd 2008 brokenwings122 Said : | |
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wow. kmp. this is good. :D |
| On January 22nd 2008 missin0you0ada Said : | |
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kmp please i like it:] |


