My Stories
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Slashers Creek [2]
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The police got a call from a camper twenty miutes later reporting that he had found two teenagers bodys, throats slashed open.
The police came to the crime scene, shocked that something like that would happen near thier little town.
The parents of the victims came down to the creek. One mother screamed and cried in shock, the other just fainted, being overwhelmed with grief.
"Parents, identify your children, please."
"Todd." Sophie whispered.
"Boys this ones still alive!" An officer yelled, hopeful she would stay alive.
The paramedics rushed over to the girls side.
"Not any more," He said dissapointed. "we lost her. To much seveere bleeding."
"My baby!" One mother yelled, bursting into tears.
The other single mother stared at her son, tears rolling down her cheeks. Finaly she asked the cop if she could go, he replied yes, but they would be contacting her on any improvement as to who killed her son.
The mother left in tears, while the other stayed until the the police said she must leave.
Two months later no one seemed to worried about the killer, no one went down to the creek, until a brave girl ventured near the area with her friends.
"Hey, Brad stop it!" A girl giggled in the backseat of a car.
"Love birds, keep it to yourselves! Nobody wants to see you make out in the back of my car!" Another girl giggled.
"Yeah Kalysta? Why don't you just keep you eyes on the road!"
There were four people in the car.
Kalysta, the driver, Amy, a giggly girl, Brad, Amy's jock boy friend, and Tahlia, a small girl who normally kept to herself.
"Hey theres a creek up here!" Tahlia said with joy.
"Should we stop and finally have some fun?" Kalysta asked.
"Ladies," Brad said. "it's summer vacation, we can do whatever we want to!"
The girls let out exited giggles, ready to splash into the water.
Kalysta parked her car on the side of the dirt road.
The girls, already expecting to go to the beach, tore off thier clothes revealing bakinis or bathingsuites.
It was around 6:54 P.M. They were supposed to get to thier destination earlier, but had to make a lot of pitstops. The pitstops consisted of movies, gas stops, or food and snacks.
Once they were all worn out it was 8:59. and dark. The group was warming in the car while something stirred outside.
"Today was really cool!" Tahlia said.
"Yeah!" The happy group said in almost unison.
While the group was conversing in the car someone outside was the car monuvering wires and pieces of metal around. But to do what?
One moment the cars engine was running and the radio was playing, and the next, it went totally dark and died.
Comments
| On September 13th 2008 aliBUBBLicious Said: |
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| You should write more. Like, really soon. It's good. Short, brief and lacking in description, but really good. Keep me updated, if you choose to write anymore. |
| On January 7th 2008 kg108551 Said: |
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| Omg! Gotta love it! :P Keep me posted! |
| On January 5th 2008 Crosspiano Said: |
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| wow!!!!!! I absolutely need to read the next!!!!!!! |
| On January 5th 2008 makana96792 Said: |
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| I like it, keep me posted |


