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Slashers Creek[chap.1] The Begining

Horror Created on 1-1-08 Views(98) Story Rating G

Sophie and Todd walked along the dark waters edge, holding hands. The two made random small talk of how they thought they would be together for the rest of thier lives. Little did they know, that was coming sooner than expected.

 The couple sat down near the water. Todd kissed his girlfriend gently on her nose. Sophie gigled and leaned in for a kiss on the lips but stopped after hearing something in the brush behind them.

 "Todd, what was that?"
"Probably just an animal."

 Sophie kissed Todd, but heard the noise again.

 "Todd." Sophie said.
"Sophie, it's just nature at night, just the shadows and owls playing tricks."
"What if someones there?" Sophie whispered in Todds ear."
"We're totally alone, no one ever comes out here."
"Why?" Sophie asked, starting to get scared.

 Suddenly Todds eyes went completely blank and round, starring at Sophie.

 "Todd?"

 Sophie noticed a gurgling noise coming out of Todds mouth, then bloody drool.

 "Oh my.. T-Todd!" Sophie screamed.
"Sorry I had to that to him, I wanted you first."

 A voice said behind her. A hand grabbed Sophies forehead pulling it back at an angle so the throat was perfectly exposed. The free grabbed a knife and put it to her neck.

 "Any last words?" He said mockingly.
"Why are you doing this?"

 All the man did was give a slight laugh and pulled the knife across Sophies neck, blood squirting and falling down her neck and chest.

 The man wiped his knife blade on Sophies shirt, cleaning it of her blood. Once done he stood and left, going into the woods, leaving the two once love struck teens bleeding and dead in the moonlight.

                                        SHOULD I CONTINUE?

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On January 21st 2008 xXFARYLUVXx Said: 
xXFARYLUVXx Oh, kmp!!
On January 4th 2008 makana96792 Said: 
makana96792 yea continue, it's good, keep me posted
On January 3rd 2008 kg108551 Said: 
kg108551 *thumbs up* yes u should! :)
On January 2nd 2008 Crosspiano Said: 
Crosspiano yes!
On January 1st 2008 blondbandgeek Said: 
blondbandgeek yes,please continue