My Stories
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Peter and Alice lost in A Wnderland of A Split Personality chapter one
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Eighteen year olds Peter and Alice laughed while playing with their dog, a scruffy mixed puppy, Max in the sunshine.
Peter picked up a red rubber ball from the green green ground.
"Max! Max look what I have!" Young peter yelled as he tossed the bouncy red ball into the blue sky.
Max barked with joy. He lept into the air catching the ball with in his mouth.
"Bring it here, Max!" Yelled Alice.
Max was running towards Alice, but suddenly stopped.
"Max! Here Max, here!" Called Alice once again.
Max dropped the red toy, turned around, and trotted off to the backyard garden, ears perked all the way.
"Alice he must have heard something." Peter told Alison.
Alice and Peter ran to the garden. Max sat perfectly still, looking at an ivy covered fence. But to their surprise Max was not looking at a fence, Max was looking at a beautiful golden wrot iron gate. But passed the gate was even more beautiful. A pink sky, green grass, and a cobble stone road.
In the middle of the road was the red rubber ball. Max barked and jumped over the gate to retrieve his toy.
"Max!" Peter tried to run after his dog but the gate was locked.
"Peter he'll come back."
Alice looked at Max. He was running away.
"Maybe we should try crawling over the gate!" Alice said.
The two scrambled over the gate and landed on the pavement.
Peter was no longer wearing blue jeans and a T-shirt, but a black and white skull hoodie and skinny jeans. He had the 'gunshot wound' hairstyle and some blonde highlights.
Alice had been wearing a grey hoodie and ripped jeans. Now she wore a purple and black corset top, matching mini skirt, ripped fishnet tights, and boot that came to her knees. Instead of blonde hair, she had scruffy black hair with blue and red highlights.
"Good idea Alice." Peter said
"Oh, shut your face! We'll just go out the same we came in."
Alice turned around and let out a piercing scream. Max was on the ground bleeding from his stomache. Patches of fur were gone revealing bones. When Peter saw his dear dog he nearly passed out.
"Well, on top of everything the gate is gone."
Alice, for the first time, looked about. The skies were grey, the trees were grey, the ground was a rotten egg salad colour, and the two were abnormally pale and strange looking.
Comments
| On December 28th 2007 Crosspiano Said: |
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| OMG!!!! I absolutely loooove it!! wow!!! I looove the word pictures!!! you are great at writing!!!! |


