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Covered In Bruises {Part 2}

Tragedy Created on 4-15-07 Views(584) Story Rating G

She raised her hand to block her face from his powerful blow. He grabbed her arm before she could fully block the hit. His fist hit her above the right eye. His ring made a gash and the blood started to flow. She now only had the sight of her left eye. The blood was flowing too frequently to see out of her right.

She now was on her knees. The blood fell to the carpet. It was just another thing she would get punished for.

"Look what you fucking did!" He screamed at her face. The whiskey scent was strong on his breath. Even though he was under age, he did drink alot. Which made the abuse more frequent.

He kicked her hard in the stomache, which made her drop to the floor. When she was down, he kicked her in the face. She could now taste the blood she could only smell moments before.

She now had trouble breathing. She was choking on the blood in her mouth. She tried to sit up, but she was in too much pain.

"What's wrong?" He said in a voice like he was talking to a baby who had fell down and scraped their knee. "Are you hurting, baby? Here, let me help you up." He said while grabbing her hair and pulling here to her feet. She screamed in pain.

Her right eye was now swollen shut. The blood flowing, now, from the spot above her eyes and from her mouth.

"I...I...am....not your...baby!" She screamed spitting blood in his face.

"You stupid little bitch!" He yelled while hitting her so hard it knocked her back to the ground.

"Let's just get this little tiny thing straight." He said while kneeling down to her ear. She was in tears now because of the pain. "If you ever try to leave me, or if you tell anyone about this.....I'll kill you. Don't think that I won't. You see that bat over there?" He said pointing to the baseball bat resting at the foot of his bed. "That bat with smash your skull in."

She was panicing now. Her lungs were on fire because of the lack of breath. She was hyperventalating. She was getting dizzy. Her world was spinning around. She knew she would never wake up from this nightmare.

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On October 18th 2007 foxracer318 Said :
foxracer318 omg. not that its any of buissness, but is this true? if it is im srry to hear that! People can be dumb like that. especially to abuse a woman! well bye! - brittany @----'---+ '
On August 14th 2007 AmiottDe Said :
AmiottDe That is so sad. Did that happen to you or someone you know? Just tell someone or shoot the bitch. Nobody should ever have to put up with that. I have a few ways to kill him and hide his body.
On June 5th 2007 gennae Said :
gennae Is that true?????If it is I`m so sorry but you need 2 report it!!!!!
On May 24th 2007 frodoismyname Said :
frodoismyname that's sad. report it. if it's true
On May 5th 2007 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 how sad :(
On April 24th 2007 CarlyVictoria Said :
CarlyVictoria When I first started reading, I heard JAWS music. Ya know, du na du na
On April 17th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
Lookin4TruLuv Never waking up from the nightmare...a lot of girls never do. But I'm very happy that you seem to have awakened. :)
On April 16th 2007 thecolorblack Said :
thecolorblack omg, its like, im reading a book but hate it cause i dont have much more to read...very good and captivating...and i wanna kill the guy btw.
On April 16th 2007 JCwashington13 Said :
JCwashington13 OMG. She should totally tell someone about this.
On April 16th 2007 imbored9909 Said :
imbored9909 wow i hate ne guy that puts ne girl through this kind of thing
On April 16th 2007 spasm01 Said :
spasm01 i think this story is quite realistic,and im reading the comments and thinkin this may be real. itd be terrible if it was.
On April 15th 2007 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 im so sorry about this. thankfully its over
On April 15th 2007 Savedbyalamb Said :
Savedbyalamb That's awful
On April 15th 2007 glamourgore Said :
glamourgore Again, doesn't seem like much fun. I am glad that it is behind you now.
On April 15th 2007 cooly10 Said :
cooly10 i feel dreadful