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A Touch of Magic (chapter 18)

Romance

Created on 4-12-08

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A Touch of Magic
Chapter 18—
Once...twice....three more time Eros kissed me lightly, hands intertwined with my hands by his chest, eyes focused on my lips, and with his back pressed up on the wall. By then I had forgotten all about what happened earlier between Taylor and me. Right now, all I was paying attention to was pleasing Eros. That, and trying not to pass out with each passing second. We paused after the 6^th one to take a break. I rested my head on his breastplate, arms still around his neck while his remained around my waist.
“I’m surprised you didn’t transform.” I smiled up at him. He smiled back down at me.
“Mmm...Me too.” He smirked. He lowered his face to mine for one last 5 second kiss. Even though it was in seconds, time seemed to be on my side by freezing over. I was reluctant to leave the privacy of his room when he tugged on my hand to lead me back to the others. I stared at our laced hands, hoping that this small sign of affection would get through Taylor’s thick head. Sure enough, he stood up from the couch to greet me when he saw our connection. I could tell he was upset by the look in his now-human eyes, even if he was trying to hide it.
“Umm...” he cleared his throat.
Eros raised his eyebrows as if he was doing nothing to make things awkward for him. I’d have to clue him in later on.
“Jamie,” Taylor addressed. “I will see you tomorrow. And this time, try not to run off before 7^th period.” I laughed nervously and agreed. I saw him take an involuntary step forward to hug me, but caught himself and decided to take advantage of his fault. He jabbed his hand out for Eros to take. By then, his right hand had wound around my waist.
”I’m glad we had the chance to finally meet each other.” He piped up once Eros accepted his kind gesture.
“I was too. I’m just glad my Jamie managed to find a decent friend at school so quickly!” Eros chuckled.
“Oh, no worries there, Sean. She was quite easy to get along with.” He assured joining in with the laughs. I blushed deeply. Both of their laughs were so deep and husky. No duh, Jamie! They’re both at least 3,000 years old! Whoa...I was going out with someone who was...2983 years older than me. Well, glad to know I wouldn’t surpass him when it came to literal age. Since people thought he was 18 or whatever... I guess I was staring off again because Eros guided me to the front door where he bid his goodbyes to Taylor, and then back to my room. Times like these I was thankful he wasn’t some kind of mythical creature, that way he wouldn’t be able to smell anything...
The distinct sound of pressure being applied onto my weak bed woke me up from my little twisted world. I looked around for his gorgeous face, and found him standing at my window, hands on the seal and his eyes gazing out into the darkness. When Greek mythology said that Greek’s used to put white, toxic, paste on their face to make them paler (the paler, the richer), it really showed on him. I opened my mouth to say something; he beat me to it.
“That boy,” he said, it was almost inaudible. I leaned in to hear him better. His pale face completely absorbed the moon’s rays, only making him seem whiter. “, he seems to be in love with you.”
“What?! Don’t be silly--”
“Jamie,” he smirked weakly looking at me. I bit my lip.
I gave up the act and sighed in defeat. “You heard... didn’t you?” I asked quietly. He nodded halfheartedly. I said something incoherent under my breath and lolled around until I buried my head in my pillow. I was somewhere between being embarrassed and utterly enraged. He called my name, but I muttered ‘Conversation over Eros. Now go away.’ He ignored my demand and pressed on. I managed to block his long speech with my pillow until my hands started to hurt, so I caught the last part of whatever he was saying.
“—so starting tomorrow, I’ll be an East Bay High student.” He finished. I shot up.
“What do you mean by that?” I asked curiously.
“Starting tomorrow, I’m going to your school.” He smiled innocently.
“WHAT?!?” I shouted so loud, I could’ve sworn I heard Keith respond from downstairs.
Eros nodded once and glimpsed at my bewildered expression. Why the heck was he surprised when he saw how pissed/dumbfounded I was?! How did he expect me to react to him suddenly deciding it was ok to come to my school? Keith’s booming voice seemed to grow fainter although he‘d just bursted through my door and was now standing next to me. My vision started to get blurry and disorientated. I saw Eros look at me worriedly and rush to my side as well, but I couldn’t hear a word he was saying. I shut my eyes to hopefully make the vertigo stop, yet it didn’t. Crap.... I knew what was about to happen. Suddenly gravity grabbed me, flipped me upside down, and slammed me down onto the ground like I was a rag doll. I lied there on the floor staring at my Spongebob slippers, completely oblivious to the strong hands lifting me up and carrying me somewhere bright.
It felt like my head was the gong and my heart was the mallet that beat me to death. If it wasn’t for Eros’ cold hands freezing my arms, I might’ve fainted long ago when I was still on the floor. Something moist was laid across my forehead and I managed to identify the object as a rag. The cool water trickled down my jaw and down my neck, settling in my collarbone. It was no used giving me the sick treatment. I already knew that I was going to faint at any moment, so it was hopeless. Sure enough, I blacked out.
((I really hate to say this but...there are only 4 more chapters of ATOM *excluding epilogue* and, even though this was against my chagrin *meaning telling you* I really hope the votes don’t go down; they always do! So plz vote and comment, chapter 19 is out and so is chapter one of Eternal Knight, plz check em out! Thanks!~Dott))

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