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Remember the rain...

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Created on 12-17-06

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I am 15 now. I'm a good person I believe. I have so many friends. I help everyone I can. I hate no one. I don’t litter. And I try not to swear. I don’t waste water. I don’t waste food. I donate to charity and I always smile......but...I was never like this. I used to be the biggest "loser" of my school...not my year...my school...I remember when I was very little. I remember living in that dirty moldy shack of an apartment with my mother and my new born baby brother. I remember the leaking roof and the 1 room that stunk of blood and mold. The air was always think and musty. And every half hour you could hear the train pass by, every half hour you could feel the shack tremble at a new coming trains wake. I remember hearing my mother cry herself to sleep while she slept on the couch and I with my little brother on the bed.I remember when I was 6 how I was always getting picked on at school up until I was 12. I remember being so badly ripped into by these "popular" "people" that I ran all the way home crying the whole way! I remember that when I got home I ran and jumped on the bed with my legs sore and my feet bloody from running for an hour non stop. I remember how socked my school top was with my tears, with my hurt. I remember when I was 8 we moved into a new apartment. This one was bigger and cleaner and nicer. I remember me and my little brother running around the new house giggling and laughing and fighting about which room was going to be whom’s. I remember one of mummy boyfriends getting drunk and mummy kicking him out and him bashing at the door for the whole night. I remember mummy crying herself to sleep that night. I remember creeping into my little brothers’ room to sleep in his bed so I'd keep him safe.I remember when I was 9 mummy was working four jobs at once and going to Tafe. I remember helping her around the house and I remember her yelling on the phone about getting different shifts so she could kiss us goodbye on the bus and good night at night. I remember going to work with mummy once after school. I remember her boss slapping her on the ass and mummy saying "no" I remember the mean mad yelling at her and firing her. I remember on the bus trip home she was trying not to cry in front of my little brother and I. But that night she did. That’s all I could hear.I remember when I was 11 mummy’s boyfriend hit her on her face and mummy falling down crying. I remember sitting at the top of the stairs hearing her scream and cry. I remember going upstairs and crying myself to sleep while holding my little brother in my arms. I remember the next morning mummy was all bruised and she couldn’t walk properly. I remember her going to work more and Uni more. I remember her missing us on the bus and not being their at nights.I remember when I was 13 mum would be out at Uni doing her new course and I would take care of my little brother and I. I would cook I would clean. I would kiss him goodbye on the bus to school and good night when it was his bed time. I remember laying in bed and hearing mum's car pull into the garage late at night. I remember seeing her by my little brothers’ bed side and crying. I remember her forgetting about me. I remember her not remembering it was my birthday. I remember crying myself to sleep that night. I remember when I was 14 on my birthday she kicked me out. I remember telling her I "HATE YOU!!" and running away. I remember crying non stop for 2 days. I remember all the times we fought and I remember all the hardships that we have surpassed......but the thing I remember the most is...
...no matter what we were doing...what we were saying or yelling...no matter where we were or whom we were with...
...I remember the rain...I remember holding my little brothers hand and my mothers hand and just standing out in the rain...letting it wash away our pain and our hurt...
...I remember us hugging in the rain and I remember that then and only then...when we were getting socked by the falling rain over our heads...I remember that we were a family...then and only then...

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On January 14th 2007 EmoXxFreakk Said :

	This is awesome. I was just like imagining the whole thing, its just really amazing.

On December 18th 2006 dictionaryquee Said :

	I love this. The repetition is great. It's not a normal story, but it kept my attention. I'd say check spelling and maybe space it out a bit more. If there are spaces on the page it makes it easier to read. keep up the good work! xx

On December 17th 2006 melaniebeck22 Said :

	pretty good...spell check though.

On December 17th 2006 bebexyooj17 Said :

	it was good..

On December 17th 2006 SN0W Said :

	This is truely amazing, how one can live with so much dispare in their life...knowing they do what they can when they can.

On December 17th 2006 Cloe09 Said :

	omg so heart wrenching jsut feel like giving u all a hug ... truly amazing

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