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My Best Friend Jamie `4`

Creative Created on 6-28-08 Views(134) Story Rating G

authors note: I wrote a really goodone,and when i submitted it it said the site was down,so Sorry it took awhile!

I walked up to the line with travis slowly coming up behind me.Jamie didn't walk into the line,she just kept going forward.

"Jamie what are you doing?"

"I already bought the tickets,remember?"

I hadn't remembered so I got out of the line and left travis waiting.When we got into the park I looked around and saw travis staring at me.His stare still gave me the creeps.I looked over at jamie who was looking at a map of the park.

"Jamie lets go to the other side of the park first" I said in a hurried voice,trying to pursuade her befor travis got out of the line.

"Why?"

"Because,if we started here,by the time we got to the other side we'd be tired,this way,when we go through everything,we'll be right by the door"

"Hm,thats not a bad idea,lets go on that one loopey ride,its at the other end of the park."

We both started walking,I looked over my should and saw travis and his friend handing their tickets to some pimple faced teenager,So I quickened my pace.Eventualy I got several feet infront of jamie,then several yards,and befor I knew it I couldn't even see jamie anymore.Buy the time I got to the ride jamie was really far behind me.

When I finally saw her walking up she was just closing her cellphone.And looking at my with a,sheesh slow down kind of a look.

"Hello there speedy" she said obviously aggitated.

"Sorry about that,it's just..I...felt like walking I guess"

"More like sprinting"

We walked up the rows into the long line of people waiting to get on this ride,and Jamie isisted on sitting in the front cart so our line was particularly long.After about 10 mintes we were finally the next ones to go.As we waited for our train to arrive I looked down the line of people we would be riding with.As I looked from one person to the next,my gaze,met travis's stare.

I quickly turned my head and turned around,trying to ignore the fact that travis was once again following me.But how? How did he know that We'd be here when I had tried so hard to go as fast as I could so he wouldn't be able to catch up.

"Jamie,looks whose in the last row"

"Oh,it's our friend from the river!"

"He's not our friend from the river jamie,he's my worst nightmare."

as I was saying this the carts pulled in and there was no point in talking anymore.We both got into our seats and we strapped in.But my mind was so far gone with my memories that I barely even noticed.

"Hey nat,is it ok if me and blake come oer for a movie or something?"

"Sure it''s fine with me,as long as you don't bring travis,he's getting annoying,always hitting on me"

"Well he likes you nat,what do you expect? plus he always has.."

"pot?"

"Yea,pot"

"I can't beleive you'd sleep with someone just for pot"

"I'm not sleeping with him!"

"Oh please"

"Oh speaking of travis hejust got here,and he has my stuff,so..see you later?"

"Ok,see you"

why does she always have to bring him,he's weird,I wish it could just be me and her and blake tonight,maybe she'll bring some pit for me though.

The cart screeched to a halt and knocked me back into reality.Jamie was laughing and screaming,but I wanted to cry.As soon as we got off I ran to the nearest bathroom I could find and I started crying.I sat in that dirty bathroom stall crying for probably a good 30 minutes befor I heard a faint

"Natalie....Natalie?"

I quickly gathered myself together.I took out my mirror and made sure it didn't look like i'd been crying.The person calling knocked on my bathroom door,recognizing my shoes,

I opened the door surprised,meeting travis instead of jamie.

"There you are natalie,I'v been looking everywere" he said looking genuinly worried.

"Travis?! What are you doing in here!"

"Looking for you"

"You don't have the right to look for me,or permission"

"Well I think I got permission when you asked me to come"

"Oh please travis,I would never ask to see you"

"Well jamie said you wanted to"

"Wait,JAMIE told you to come?"

"Well,she told me that you wanted me to,and then she called and told me you were riding the Twister first"

"Why would she do that to me?" I said sinking to the floor.Jamie was my only friend,and she told the man stalking me were I was.

"Were is she?"

"She went home,she said you could ride with me" he said,with his extemely creepy grin.

I just stood there,shocked beyond all reason.

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On July 2nd 2008 Kdanae88 Said :
Kdanae88 Im not liking Jamie anymore.. kmpp! =)
On June 30th 2008 angel281295 Said :
angel281295 jamie is really naughty somehow...well, kmp please
On June 29th 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 kmp plz
On June 29th 2008 ILOVERASCALS Said :
ILOVERASCALS KMPP
On June 29th 2008 raetakeninluv1 Said :
raetakeninluv1 kmp
On June 29th 2008 qosdfyjvwefayv Said :
qosdfyjvwefayv for sum weird reason i dont think travis is as bad as jamie... hrmm makes me think. kmp!! :)
On June 29th 2008 HALMAY Said :
HALMAY KMP KMP KMP
On June 29th 2008 Atlangel5 Said :
Atlangel5 JAMIE = EVIL !!!!!! Shr knows NAT is totally creeped out by travis but just goes on lying and planing. Geez poor NAT!!!!!!!!! PLZ KMP!!!!!!!!!
On June 29th 2008 albanianvukaj Said :
albanianvukaj oah, umm, ok thats kinda mean.... kmpp :)
On June 28th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott wow dats mean PKMP
On June 28th 2008 tiffany1058 Said :
tiffany1058 KMPP
On June 28th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess wow thats kinda rotton lol. i know she wants them to talk but thats kinda rude...this story is like REALLY good so PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!!!!!!!
On June 28th 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
musiclover2050 kmpp