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Down to Basics P1

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"Throught the corners of time,and the bending of light,I'll be there,when the bad turns around" Jesse sang out the crappy lyric with such grace,such melody.Such a beautiful voice,singing such and awful song.The loud applause were simply because of how good jesse was.She was a great singer,but her lyracist,James Sullivan,well he was horrible.

Once they're show was over, and Crusaders Revieled came out,they went to Gingers for pizza.Gingers was were they always went after they played.Even if it was just in their little pool house,which is were thay practiced.They loved to talk about how good,or bad,they did after they played so this particular time they were there for almost 3 hours.

"Hey Hank,How come everyone got so sloshed after our performance?" Darin said as her climbed back into the drivers seat of his 1998 van.

"Probably because of you awful drumming" Hank said,making darin smile and drew laugh at his twin.

"It was probably because drew messed up the 3rd cord in 'Hangin on These Strings" Jesse said critiqueing drew in her very subtle way.

"Well maybe if jesse here hadn't been off key when I messed up the cord..."

"Hey Drew,Cool it ok?" Hank retorted.

"Sheez,why so snappy hank? Not like she likes you anymore then she likes me"

"Ok that wa suncalled for buddy" hank yelled getting semi-aggressive with drew.

"BOYS!" Jesse yelled

"Can we PLEASE just celebrate our first gig without any of your drama?"

"Fine Jesse" Hank and Drew said at the same time.

"It's ok Jesse,Atleast I'm on your side" Darin said flashing his killer smile at Jesse.

"Maybe we should just go home without these fools" jesse said in a jokingly seductive tone.

"Maybe we should" Darin joked back.

"Would you to just shut up already?" Drew said.

Jesse climbed in the back seat.Drew and Hank looked at each other,then dashed to the car door,Hank getting there first and promptly situating himself next to jesse leaving drew to sit either with the equipment,or next to Darin.

"Next time hank" Drew said eyeing him from the front seat. "Next time I win"

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On May 29th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 As everyone said. Mistakes. But a great story :D
On May 27th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x Edit it, but still good, kmp
On May 26th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 there are a lot of mistakes but still kmp
On May 25th 2008 geli01 Said :
geli01 this is great! next time u should revise though, alot of spelling and grammar errors. KMP!