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(3rd chapter) Life Sucks!

I;m starting to like it now.
Drama Created on 1-25-09 Views(71) Story Rating PG13

Previously!

Hello Nea....You dont know who this is do u....I'm your parents murder...!" Then I heard a faint laugh and the line went dead...

Now)

I dropped the phone in shock...Wondering if this was really real. Or if it was a sick joke. I quickly grabbed the phone in my grasp and dialed the number.

"Hello?" I was furious. "WHO THE HELL CALLED ME WHO ARE YOU!" the man on the other line laughed. "ANSWER ME!! GOD DAMN IT!!!" "Nea I told u who I was..." The voice said calmy. I sighed. "Who...are ....u?" "I know things about u Nea... Shall I tell u?"

The man begain. "YOu are 16. You have a best friend who you call PJ. You have a fake ID.-" I was shocked 'how th ehell did he know all this?' I thought to myself. "Nea? Shall I tell you how I know this?" I ansewered. "YES" the man cleared his throught.

"Your dad gave it to you...its the last thing you see every night...You loved it as a child and you still do now...Only if you had listened to PJ when she told you...that you were too old to have it still...and to throw it out" He paused to laugh. "Bye..." then the line went dead.

I sighed. "What to do? what to do?" Just then I heard the sounds of thumping and banging. I sighed in disgust. I walked over to my wall and banged on it

"HEY PJ!! KNOCK IT OFF THATS DISGUSTING!!!" I heard PJ laugh in pleasure. I sighed again. I went over to my bed and saw my containor of pills for my pain and thoughts. I opened it and took 2 pills. I laid on my bed and sighed. I then drifted off to sleep and tryed to dream about the call and what he ment on how he was watching me...

(flash back dream)

I remember when My dad came home the night he was murdered. He was so happy he had got a raise. My mom was so happy too. I ran in the room happy and jumped into his arms. He reached around his back and pulled out a present. I saw it and opened it. It was a teddy bear I loved that teddy bear. I ran aroud the room. Then my dad and my mommy picked me up and took me to bed. I reached for my teddy bear and felt the lips of my mom and dad kiss me goodnight...

Then 2 arms picked me up and i reached up for my teddy bear. I thought it was my dad holding me so i snuggled up to the body. I heard voices say "MAn what a mess." Or "Oh my god!" or "Poor little girl she gonna be an orphan now..." And alot more. the figure holding me kept a blanket around mme and my head. I reached up to pull off the blanket when I did...I saw blood...on the walls ...the couch...floor...my parents had 7 knifes in each of their backs....And their trroughts were slit...they had falled dead in the direction of my bedroom my mom was 3 feet away from my dads body...I screamed at the top of my lungs. the man put the blanket over me again. I cryed. Then I ehld my teddy bear. It was my favorite thing in the world...I still loved it...I was pised off when PJ tried to convince me to throw it away..........The teddy bear!

I jumped up awake. and sprug up to my feet and ran to my shelf that was over my TV across my bed. I grabbed it and got a knife. I ripped it open while crying for my dad got it for me when i was very little. Once open I found a camera...the eyes were the lens...He was watching me form it...jsut then my phone rang

"Hello Nea...guess u found out huh?..." The he laughed a blood curling laugh...

TO be continued.....

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On July 25th 2009 KazzyKassie Said: 
KazzyKassie Really good keep up the good work.
On January 25th 2009 Soubigirl Said: 
Soubigirl Ya I realized I made mistakes. But I thought it would be a better story if her parents were murdered. lol
On January 25th 2009 BelovedEmo Said: 
BelovedEmo Its really good girly i like it how it is so keep going
On January 25th 2009 onaipwolf Said: 
onaipwolf You have a very good idea for your story and your characters are interesting. You may want to work a little more on consistency in your details though. You said the Dad committed suicide before, but now he's been murdered. I'm guessing this is because your story is changing as you write it. There is nothing wrong with that, I do it all the time. It's just more obvious when you post right away without any more having been written. You have a few grammatical errors and such, but on this website that doesn't seem to matter. Anyway, sorry for making this so long. I wish you the best, and I hope she figures out what's going on soon. :)
On January 25th 2009 roseling Said: 
roseling ahhhh i love it i want more it is really good