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The riseing part 20

Other Created on 8-31-07 Views(44) Story Rating G

Me and Nix spent most of the night in my room and she got tired but i felt wide awake so i layed down and about 5 second's later she layed her head on my chest.

Nix:I can hear your heart beat

Alex:What is it normal or raceing?

Nix:Hehehe it's raceing

Next minuet she shot up with a shock look on her face then blood started to come out of my mouth.

Nix:I heard your heart rip

I was'nt really bothered i could feel the pain but i was makeing no noise then i got flung against the wall but i did'nt bust through the wall and i collapsed on my hand's and knee's then a voice said.

Voice:Your not as strong as i predicted

Then he lifted me and smashed me against the ceiling with a big thud then i took out my sword and he smashed me against the ceiling again and i droped my sword then me and Nix looked at eachother she could see pain and fear in my eye's and still she could see love then she picked up my sword and made a guess and ran mysword through the invisable man and he came out of his cloak we could see him then he ran and disapered and said.

Man:She is stronger than you they chose wrong

I fell unconcous

TO BE CONTINUED 

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On September 6th 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 good story =]
On September 1st 2007 pure0wn23 Said :
pure0wn23 omg! what a twist!!
On August 31st 2007 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 O_O.....o.O.......COOLIEZ!! Great story!!