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The riseing part 19

Other Created on 8-30-07 Views(40) Story Rating G

I had decided to spend the night at Nix house well she did ask if i wanted to so i did it was about 1:00c'lock in the morning and i heard a knock at the door for some reason i decided to stay quiet i don't know why though but they came in anyway and sat on the bed next to me i was sitting up under my sheet's so i could'nt see who it was.

Nix:What are you doing under there?

Alex:Thinking

Nix:Thnking? about what?

Alex:Life and all the bad that's happening and the girl i love

Nix:O who's this girl?

Alex:I thought i told you?

Nix:I guess snot well tell me now you mentioned it i MUST know who it is so tell me

Alex:It's.........it's a girl

Nix:O haha smartass c'mon who is it?

Alex:I just told you a girl

Nix:So her name is "A girl"

Alex:No

Nix:Well tell me

Alex:Ok her name is...........*i went blank*

After about 10 second's Nix pulled the sheet off me.

Nix:What's wrong?

I just staired in to her eye's.

Alex:Please move away before i do something i'm gonna regret

I did'nt see anything in her eye's no love no fear not even friendship and i see that alot in most my friend's she seemed cloudy.

Nix:Waht do you mean"something your gonna regret"?

Alex:Wekk if you stay there you'll find out but please don't move away

I did'nt push her i did'nt move her at all i wanted her to stay there so i had a reason.

Nix:C'mon what could be so bad?

I could tell that she could see something in my eye's.

Alex:What do you see?

Nix:Huh?

Alex:In my eye's what do you see?

Nix:I see love

Alex:And?

Nix:And fear and well everything really mainly love and fear i guess

Alex:Well seem's like it's time to do what i'm gonna regret for age's

Nix:O rea........

I did what i was gonna regret for probably my whole life i kissed her i did warn her to move but for some reason she did'nt fight i don't know why she did'nt do anything i layed down i got confused i thought she was gonna push away but she followed then i got even more confused when i pushed her away.

Alex:I'm sorry i should'nt have done that i..................i'm sorry

Nix:Why?

Alex:Why did i do it well you saw love and fear in my eye's correct?

Nix:Yes

Alex:Well your the girl hence the love and the kiss well that was the fear

Nix:You had fear in your eye's cause of one kiss?

Alex:Yup*sigh*

TO BE CONTINUED

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On September 1st 2007 pure0wn23 Said :
pure0wn23 "Nix:So her name is "A girl"" i luaghed so hard, i know a girl that we call "girl" lol
On August 31st 2007 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 hehehe....im practicing on how to make it to where my emotion in my eyes stay blank...i cant do it yet but im close...GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT STORY!!!!!!!!! (yes i ment to put that many greats)