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Other Created on 8-29-07 Views(42) Story Rating G

Next after about a minuet of silence Jesse was about to walk out of the kitchen.

Jesse:Who the fu........

A soon as Jesse was about to finish saying fuck i saw a blade come through him and a blood splat across my face Jesse fell over but i cought him.

Alex:WHO THE FUCK ARE YOU?! WHAT DO YOU HAVE TO COME HERE AND KILL MY FRIEND'S FOR!?

Cloaked man:Were is the girl?

Alex:Girl what girl?

Cloaked man:The one you call Nix?

Alex:What do you want with Nix?*i put Jesse on the table and covered the cut*

Jesse whispered to me.

Jesse:If he lay's a hand on her kill him

I whispered back.

Alex:I'm gonna kill him if he lay's an eye on her

I stood up and looked back at the man.

Alex:What's your name? and what do you want with Nix?

Cloaked man:My name is of no inportance and my buissness is my own

Alex:If you have buissness with one of my friend's it's all my buissness! so tell me now!

Cloaked man:I'm not here to harm her if that's what you mean?

Alex:No your here to kill her and i'm obviously gonna think that cause you stabed Jesse!

Cloaked man:Um ah oops sorry bout that

He walked over to Jesse and put his hand over him and i did'nt feel worried or nervouse in the slitised and i was wondering why.

Cloaked man:There all better now sorry bout that Jesse

Jesse:Well you healed me so i'm not really that bothered but i am a bit you fucking stabed me

The man took his hood off.

Alex:You? why are you here?

Cloaked man:I know we have had a bad history

Alex:BAD HISTORY! YOU KILLED MOST MY FRIEND'S YOU DICK!

Cloaked man:O and i changed my name

Alex:LIKE I GIVE A SHIT WHAT YOUR NAME IS I WANT YOU GONE! NOW!

Cloaked man:Look i'm sorry for that and my name is History

Alex:YOUR SORRY! WELL SORRY AINT GONNA CUT IT! AND I SAID I DON'T CARE WHAT YOUR NAME IS JUST GO! LEAVE NOW!

Jesse:I would do as he say's

History:Fine

Nix came down the stair's.

Nix:What's with all the shouting? who's he?

Alex:He's leaveing

I put my sword on his back and made him leave the house like i was makeing him walk the plank on a pirate ship as he was about to take that last step outside i rose my sword a cut him all the way down his back.

Alex:That's all you get i don't know why i should'nt kill you here and now i guess i feel pitty on you

I slammed the door as soon as i finished my sentence all i heard comeing from outside was moaning and groaning.

Nix:Why did you do that?

Alex:He killed all my friend's when i was younger i would rather not talk bout it

Nix:Mkayz

TO BE CONTINUED

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On September 1st 2007 pure0wn23 Said :
pure0wn23 lol! this is awesome
On August 29th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 ......HES A DICK!! and his name is histeory?....neat but weird...GREAT STORY!!
On August 29th 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 I LOV IT! =]