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Other Created on 8-26-07 Views(45) Story Rating G

He pushed Nix against the wall and started to kiss her and put his hand down her pant's and up her top.

Alex:Your makeing a big misstake

My heart was so loud it woke up Jesse but he was woozy.

Alex:Drop the girl

Kalipso:Your not in the position to make order's

Alex:Fine then i'll put myself in the position

i started to tug and pull at the chain's as hard as i could.

Kalipso:Futile that won't work there made from titanium steel

Alex:Who said i was trying to break the chain's

I got hit with the rage again my eye's turned crimson red and i pulled on the chain's harder and harder untill i heard a crack as the concrete piller started to give once i heard the crack i stoped pulling and tugged on the chain's as hard as possible.

Alex:Your gonna regret this AHHHHHHHHHH!

I tugged on the chain's one last time and the end came flailing out of the concrete and the first thing that came to mind.

Alex:Pain without love pain i can't get enough pain i like it rough cause i would rather feel pain than nothing at all put the girl down NOW!*i rose my head and he saw the crimson in my eye's*

Kalipso:Make me

Alex:O your so gonna wish you had'nt said that YOUR FUCKING DEAD!

I rushed toward's him at a high speed and i whiped the chain on my right arm as hard as i could and hit him in the back and he fell over and Nix fell with him but she landed on top of him so i walked over and released her and put her to one side and started to hit Kalipso wioth the chain's for about 5 minuet's then i took the key from his pocket and took of the chain's and gave Nix the key.

Alex:Get Jesse down*i turned to kalipso*this will be more fun with my bear hand's*a grined big and evil*

I sat over him and started to pumle him with both of my fist's

TO BE CONTINUED

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On August 28th 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 this was really good!
On August 26th 2007 pure0wn23 Said :
pure0wn23 see that wasnt hard to write! that was awesome!!!!! best part yet!
On August 26th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 ooooooooooooo....AWSOME!!!