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The riseing part 10

Other Created on 8-22-07 Views(48) Story Rating G

I was walking through a town i had no idea were i was it did'nt even look like home or well anywere it was dark and gloomy i did'nt think i had been walking for so long but i was thinking of Nix the whole time she probably pissed at me or something.

After about another 10 minuet's of walking i heard a noise a quickly drew out my sword and shield i turned around and i saw a big shinny sword come right at me so i blocked with my sword and pushed it away and lungged at the person.

Guy:Hahaha i thought you were good but not this good

Alex:Who are you and what do you want!?

Guy:Hey no need to be forcefull now i'm friend not foe

Alex:Tell me your name and tell me were i am

Guy:My name hmm my name well to be honist i don't know my name and we are in a forest

Alex:Mmkay you don't know your name and could you be more specific than forest please

Guy:Well my friend's called me Hawk and well i call these wood's merish

Alex:Cool name for you and the forest well more your name i love bird's

Hawk:Bird? what's a bird

He looked at me very confuzzled.

Alex:What did you say? you've never heard of a bird?

Hawk:No

Alex:O my god what kind of wildlife do you have here?

Hawk:None we have'nt had any since well the evil took over

Alex:Evil? what evil?

TO BE CONTINUED

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On August 22nd 2007 pure0wn23 Said :
pure0wn23 i would just like to say one thing...DUN DUN DUN!!!
On August 22nd 2007 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 ME EVIL!!!! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! lmao great story!!
On August 22nd 2007 lalaloca2 Said :
lalaloca2 hehehe AWESOME!