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The story of a normal guy part 11

Other Created on 8-14-07 Views(36) Story Rating G

It was about 2 day's after and jesse had been pushing me he still was pushing me to move out i was looking at place's to buy i found one far far away or i could get jesse to help me build a log cabin on a hill that we saw.

It was about 3 hour's later and we decided to build the cabin Nix knew nothing about it.

It had been about 5 week's and we finally finished so we went home to pack up my stuff we did'nt notice Nix standing at my bedroom door

Nix:WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING!?

Alex:I have to

Nix:Why? why do you HAVE to?

Alex:Cause i can't bear to stay with the one i love when she love's someone else*i started to tear up*

Nix:But you can't

Alex:And why not?*i cried*

Nix:Because

Alex:Not good enough bye

I rushed out and Jesse yelled at me"Good ridence!"i turned around with a very angry look on my face and walked toward's him with my fist's clenched and Jesse started to back away

Alex:WHAT YOU THINK I'M HAPPY PACKING UP ALL MY STUFF AND LEAVEING NIX?!

Jesse:Sorry man sorry

Alex:SORRY SORRY! THAT'S NOT GOOD ENOUGH! YOU'VE BEEN PUSHING ME TO GO FOR THE PAST TWO MONTH'S AND I'M SICK OF IT JESSE!*i grabed the top of his t-shirt and rose my fist ready to hit him*

Nix:NO DON'T ALEX YOU WON'T GAIN ANYTHING FROM IT!

I did it anyway i was to angry to hear what Nix was saying i was enraged as i hit Jesse he fell to the ground and crawlled away i walked over to him and sat on him and started to punch his face i could'nt stop even though i wanted to and i started to cry because i knew what i was doing and i did'nt want to and as i was punching Jesse Nix pulled out a dart gun

Nix:I'm sorry*Nix shot me with a dart full of tranqualizer liquid*

I stoped and got up and walked to Nix and collapsed on my knee's in front of her and whispered"Thank you"and then i fell asleep and then Nix rushed out to call and ambulance for Jesse

TO BE CONTINUED

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On August 14th 2007 pure0wn23 Said :
pure0wn23 haha! now jesse is punished!!!! thank god!
On August 14th 2007 LostSoul1121 Said :
LostSoul1121 ......a dart gun...haha...i would just broke up the fight myself...no weapons needed. haha....but then i would cry...great story!