Created By

Sk8ncutie001

Rate this Story

Embed

 The week of my birthday(17) everything was going better. Emma found a new kid, rebound much? But other then that everything was the same.

 When Saturday(my birthday) came around i hung out with my friends the whole day and then all night i spent with Derrick. We sat on the beach and watched the sun set and the stars. Just as i was about to go to sleep, Derrick picked up my chin and kissed me. I smiled but kept my eyes close. He laid down and layed me on his stomach and we fell asleep.

 My mom knew about me and him going out there at night and before she gave me protection just in case. I told her (she didnt know about the rape part) that i was waiting till marriage and so was Derrick. I mean being raped doesnt count as my Virginity being gone, does it? I mean yeah the piece of skin that was there is riped, but in God's eyes, am i still a Virgin?

 The next day we all went to the woods and played hide and go seek. Hannah and Yalonda brought their crushes (Hannah- Justin, Yalonda-Danny[No its not a girl]) When i was pretty far from the group i collapsed onto the ground. Derrick jogged over to me and took my hand. "I have the perfect place to hide." I smiled and let him take me. We came apon this huge tree house. He climbed up as i said, "Are we aloud too?" "Yeah, i made it when i was 13." "Ok." I climbed up with him helping me. When we got up there he started to kiss me and i pulled him deeper into the kiss. I fell against the wall and he picked me up. I put my arms on his shoulder and he was holding my legs.

 When we heard leafs crunching we didnt stop kissing, nothing could tear us apart, I mean I was in love and I think he is too. As all of them climbed into the tree house we stopped and looked over. He put me down when he saw Yalonda's face, while i pulled my shirt, that was right below my chest, down. She smiled and he helped them all up. We sat on the floor and played spin the bottle. At night we all climbed down and laid in the field and watched the stars and fell asleep in their(our boyfriends or chrushes) arms.

 The next morning i woke up and everyone else was asleep except Derrick. He was laying there holding me and watching me sleep. When me and him got up we relized that Hannah and Justing were making out and so was Emma and her new guy, Caleb. Me and him snuck into the woods and sat next to a tree with his arms and my arms around eachother. "I love you, Ashley." I looked at him, then smiled. "I love you, too." He kissed me gently on the lips. "I want to stay like this forever." I said as he looked to the sky. At once Ordinary Day played in my head. "Me too." He said smiling and looking into my eyes. As the others woke up, Derrick and I stayed there looking into eachothers eyes, or kissing, in eachothers arms. It was...perfect!

 Do ya like it? Plz tell me with comments and rates!!!