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The Promise -- Chapter One -- by Yvonne Lozano
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leon knocked on the door to charles room. "you know how hard it is to catch a break, let alone sleep, and so far, i've had neither." he snapped half asleep.
leon chuckled. he handed charlie the tickets and charlie studied them grudgedly. soon his face was swept away of any emotion except fondness. as if an old memory had returned. "leon... i... can't" "and why not?" he fisted his hand and pulled them to his hips, "really, when was the last time you've been to calowic town?" "i can't" the lach was bolted again. ***
they stopped at The Square and departed off the bus. "keya!" leon bellowed. "it's great to see you! you look lovely!" she had hair like a black moon and eye's like white saphire. she looked at him and her eye's softened. "come" she said "i'll show you guys your rooms" "you planned this?" charlie pressed leon as they start to walk. a picture of keya and charlie at age eight still hanged in it's same spot from when he left. the brown, soft couch charlie sat on still laid in the same spot it had laid in when he left. the chairs in the room, the shelves, the coffee table, everything, unchanged from the day he left. "i... dont think, i love you like i did back then anymore" "it was five years ago!" fire filled her eyes. as she stepped toward him she seemed to grow and the room seemed to shrink. the door leading to the kitchen slanted inward. the picures on the walls and the shelves were sucked away into the walls. the coffee table and the couch along with all other things sank into the floor. soon, it was just a fifty foot tall keya, a small room and charlie crumbling under it all.
charlie looked. all passengers were peering out the window gasping and asking questions like charlie. "welcome to calowic town" leon said painfully with a sense of bitterness. charlie's eyes grew wide and glassed over with tears as he stared out the window. also growing angry. a phone rang in the middle of the night. ivan meowed repeatedly for keya to wake up. she groaned and turned over. ivan sighed in a way all cats do. he jumped on the bed then on the dresser table near the bed where the phone was. ivan pawed the phone off the reciever.
"well he's about to get a week off, i was wondering if it was alright that we came down there to, you know, visit" ivan imagined leon with that big smile of his, leon was just about always smiling. ivan meowed once again then turned and jumped ..a. she batted him away and groaned. ivan pawed around her to try and find an arm or a leg, when he found one he attacked it. she pushed him away but he only came back. she sat up. "what do you want?" she mumbled. ivan trotted back to the phone. "hello?" keya said half asleep. leon explained what he wanted to do. keya set a bowl of wet cat food on the ground for ivan. she sat herself at the kitchen table with her own plate of sunny side up eggs and bacon. when ivan finished he jumped up on the table and settled himself down, at a distance from keya's food. she taught him when he was little, and when he would jump up and nipp at her food, to stay away while she ate. if he did so, he usualy got a piece of what ever she was eating. after she was almost done she took a piece of her egg and held it out for ivan, he 'mewed' and took it in. delicous. he was carefull not to bite her fingers when he ate from her hand. he detested hurting her in anyway. keya was fair to him, always, she only punished him when he did wrong. once, when he was a kitten and wanted to play around he wrestled with her hand. but he took it too far when he bit down too hard and made her bleed. she smacked him and licked her wound. at first he was angry with her for hitting him, but then he saw the blood from where he bit her, and he understood. of couse, he had too much pride to go to her and apoligize by licking her wound for her, so instead he just gazed around the room and crouched down lazily. 11 o'clock. ivan rested on the couch while he waited for keya to return home from work. growing bored he jumped down and trotted out the little cat door keya put in herself just for him. he streched on the pourch and rubbed against the pillar as a newspaper boy rode by. through out the day he basked himself in the sun or prounced around other cats(mostly females). the sun began to set, keya had taught ivan to come in when it was getting dark. he retraced his steps all the way back to the cat door. keya was home and greeted him with a warm smile and a "hey ivan!" she picked him up and kissed him on the top of his head, with that she set him down saying his food was ready if he was hungry and then she lached the cat door. they watched tv together, ivan was happy just to to lay at keya's side. keya settled in bed while ivan went to the kitchen for a snack. as he ate he sensed something wrong, something bad, the feeling ached him. worried, he trotted speedily back to keya, who was sleeping soundly already. he gave a relieved 'mew' and pushed the door closed like keya had taught him. he settled next to her, under her extended arm. the feeling remained gone untill midnight. a sound rustled out side a near by window. ivan stared momentarily then went to check it out. nothing was there as far as he could see. he sniffed, an unfamilar smell resided by the window, almost as if, the smell wasn't leaking in from outside-in. worried almost to panic, he jumped to keya and clawed her awake.
the rustling noise came again, but on the other side of the room by the open door. "charlie and leon are supposed to come today, maybe, they can do something." keya said to ivan, both of them still in bed. keya finally sighed and walked to the door. she hesitated then swung the door open, sprinting back to the bed. she grabbed her heart and breathe heavily in and out. "i dont know how much more i can take" ivan trotted into the next room where keya held a broken lach in her hand. she lifted the cat door and fingered black soot that was scraped onto it. "i hope they come soon" keya said to herself more than to ivan. she looked at ivan, ivan cocked his head to the side then suddenly the hair on him bristled up and he hissed. keya looked down to see a black creature with yellow eyes poking it's head under the cat door flap smiling. she screamed. the creature grabbed her wrists and tried pulling them to it's mouth. she pulled away. slinging it across the room. it hit the wall. the little creature seemed to laugh and growl at the same time as it charged again at keya. keya jumped to grab something she could use to defend herself. as she tried to move she tripped. another chattering laugh escaped from the cat door. attached to her ankel another black sooted creature was pulling her to it's mouth. it smiled and laughed, showing it's evenly spaced out sharp teeth. it bit into her flesh, she screamed and kicked it. the other black soot roared an evil laugh as it grabbed hold of her hair. just then ivan jumped on it, clawing it, and hissing. keya kicked the creature on her leg off of her. Black Soot and ivan circled eachother. a scream from the house next door and simular laughing filled keya's ears. they weren't the only ones under attack. there were more of them, evading them. but why? Black Soot grabbed ahold of ivan bit into his shoulder blade. ivan screeched and tried to shake his attack off. keya grabbed a chair near the couch and smacked Black Soot down. she grabbed ivan and took off down the hall, finding a closet. Blast Soot and the other little black creature banged on the door. ivan hissed and shot forward, scratching the door in an attempt to scare them away. they only laughed. the door began to crack and spinter. keya held her scream in. she grabbed ivan, pulling him close to her chest. she wrapped her arms tight around ivan so he couldn't escape. a little monster hand broke through the door and clawed keya's right leg. ivan pulled out of her grasped and bit the hand. there was a screech then silence. ivan growled, hair still bristling. the door handle jiggled, keya realized quickly what was happening and practically jumped for the handle. holding the door closed. the screeching and growling returned. along with laughing. another hand slipped in through the crack in the door and got keya's side. ivan bit that hand again and hissed. the house shook, and suddenly heat filled the closet. at one point, keya was forced to let go of the handle several times becuz it burned. the laughing stopped and Black soot and it's companion had left. even then, keya was scared nearly out of her mind to open the door. more crackling sounds were heard. keya almost screamed when she saw the flames at the roof of the closet. her house was on fire! she began to cry. she let go of the handle and leaned against the farthest corner of the closet, under a few shelves. ivan laid in her lap and she gently stroked him. suddenly the door open and a large mass of Black Soots were apon them. keya finally let out a scream. then, fearing for ivan, she fought them. kicking, and punching. they mobbed her and ivan. the fire spread down the walls and burnt her sides, but she was too involved with the Black Soots to notice. one of the shelfs caught fire, it broke off the wall and fell down ..a's head. she clasped under it. ivan meowed desperately. she managed to mumble. more Black Soots came in. they pulled her hair and bit her flesh. blood began to splatter the walls. ivan jumped in and attacked them. they mobbed him, and he ran out of the closet, all followed. |
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| On June 22nd 2008 SilverTorch Said : | |
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actually when i wrote this me and him weren't go'n out. but now we are again so it doesn't really matter haha. i love you bye. -yvie- |
| On May 28th 2008 Djshadownite Said : | |
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Wow. This is pretty intense. Kmpp =)
your gf seems to be pretty talented with writing. |
| On May 28th 2008 SilverTorch Said : | |
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^^my girlfriend wrote this, shes using my profile |


