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Lucinda Dawnn..Chapter 1.

Other Created on 6-21-08 Views(118) Story Rating G

Ashh?

Ashh?

   Ashh is the one that'll help me. The one who.....Turned me? My Sire? Im just finding this out. He came clean.

  "So why do you tell me this now?" I said in shock. So many questions and explinations are going through my mind right now. 'When did he becaome a vampire?' Chills went through my spine when I thought of such a word. 'Vampire.' More chills. 'Why didnt he tell me this before?' I mean he was my best friend. More of a brother to me. 'That explanis why he hardley ate around me I guess.' 'That explains why his eyes changed colors sometimes.'

These were the thoughts that were racing through my mind. I never would have thought that he would be a-- a-- vampire...More chills.

  "I felt guilty." He said shyly. "You freak. Why did you turn me?"

  "Because you died, Lucinda!"

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On September 14th 2008 ShannonShades Said :
ShannonShades WOOAHHH!!! hhahaha. damnn, thats what i call being straight forward! haha
On June 22nd 2008 ddiana3 Said :
ddiana3 awesome! kmp. great story plz try to make them longer tho cause im dying to hear what happens next! kmp. =]]
On June 21st 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 kmpp
On June 21st 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 i really do like it but in the future try to make them longer... that is really all that should be improved so kmp
On June 21st 2008 HALMAY Said :
HALMAY you're going up hill at full speed *toot* *toot*!!!!! keep on keepin on. kmpp!!!!
On June 21st 2008 Shrimpie0008 Said :
Shrimpie0008 I know its not that long, but tell me what you like of this. (: Sorry so short, and the reason I out this as chapter one, is caue the other one was the intro. (: Hope you enjoy this.! Honestly, if you think im going down hill, write me a message and tell me how to imporve. (: