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The Curse of Magix *prologue*
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AUTHOR'S NOTE: umm before you begin reading this... i want you to know that this is a story i wrote a few years ago for a creative writing class... so it's not very good, even though i have made a few changes and it's much better than before... but i decided to put it up anyways...
The realm of Magix, the center of the universe, is cursed, and it has been for a very long time, too long for anyone to remember when it all started. However, the legend of the curse still lives among the people... All of the people originally from Magix are evil, but are trying their hardest to do good; trying to hide their evil sides. However, there are others who accept tje fact that they're vil and are trying to bring about the destruction of the universe...
Thousands and thousands of years ago, Magix was the most beautiful realm in the universe. It's pride and glory was the palace and its garden. The palace was made of the purest glistening crystal, and the garden had a flower of every variety and color imaginable. All of this beauty, all of this purity, was destroyed with one simple mistake.
One day, the queen, Crystal, used an unauthorized spell. She did it, of course, unintentionally. The evil spirits of the land had switched the titles of the spells around. This spell, was labeled "use in case of severe illness". Crystal's daughter was very ill, so she used the spell. Just then, the gods and goddesses from the Otherworld of the Spirits spoke in their mysterious, half-whisper, half-chant voices.
"Crystal... you have used an unauthorized spell... thus, as a punishment, your realm will be cursed... for all eternity..." And then, as breath melts into the wind, the voices faded away.
In a flash of light, the evil spirits then took residence in all of the people of Magicanian blood, making them all partially evil. The beauty of Magix became distorted, the peace disrupted, and this realm, that had once been the most beautiful place in the universe, suddenly became ruins.
However, as you might have guessed, this did not satisfy all of the Magicanians. So, after a lot of work, the people of Magix restored their beloved realm, so that it was, once again, the most beautiful realm in the universe. Everyone had pitched in to banish the darkness once more; planting flowers, making stained glass windows, and decorating the palace.
Now, bring yourself back to the present. That all happened thousands of years ago. Let me tell you something: very few people who are living in Magix are actually from Magix. Most of the original people from Magix died in an epic battle between them and the Drakaans. The majority of the few survivors are blending in with everyone else, and they're trying to conceal their evil sides. There is only one group of Magicanians who are trying to destroy the world. The group? One word: witches.
The one Magicanian we will be focusing on is, in fact the princess of Magix; Andrea. Her name holds a magical powers and a dangerous curse. If it is said, terrible things will happen. So, instead of being called Andrea, she likes to be called Ciarra insead. Anyways, enough of this, let's get to the real story...
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| On March 6th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said : | |
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It's really creative :) |
| On November 10th 2007 Artemisseven Said : | |
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sounds interresting |


