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Run Away (Part 1)
Fiction
 Created on 8-24-07
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 Story Rating G
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This is by myself and my friend Katie.
Taya giggled as she chased her little brothers down the grass hill, her long black hair stretched just past her shoulder blades. As she reached the bottom of the hill she collapsed with her twin brothers lying either side of her, she pointed to a cloud “Look it’s a bunny!” she giggled, “It’s not a bunny it’s a fish!” exclaimed Dante, “No, it’s a dog!” Chay protested. Taya could hardly breathe because she was laughing so hard.
A door slammed at the top of the hill as their older sister, Ailith, came storming out of the house, “Taya, you should be helping me clean up and you’d think a 18 year old woman would have more sense then to be playing around with her brothers that are 9 years younger than she.” Shouted Ailith as loud as she could. Before Taya could even get up off the grass another familiar voice was heard from inside the house, “Taya! You better get up here and help us clean the house now, or you are in big trouble missy! Also do I always have to treat you like you’re 5 to get you to do anything around here!” her mother, Alisabith called.
Taya sulkily got up and headed towards the house, she was tired of being bossed around by her sister and mother, not only was she always being bossed around but Ailith’s daughter, Kaylee, had always been a thorn in her side. She was thinking of leaving them.
As Taya quietly swept the kitchen floor her mother walked in, “Why can’t you learn to behave like a true woman should, we will never be able too betroth you while you continue on like this.” Her mother said in a fed up tone. Taya stayed silent, her mother glared at her, “If I say something like that I expect you to respond!” she shouted, Taya’s heart sunk and tears formed in her eyes, “I’m sorry mother but whatever I say it seems to always be wrong.” She replied with a soft voice, she leaned the broom against the wall and walked towards her bedroom door.
As she sat on her bed tears slid down her soft cheek and fell onto her beautiful violet dress.
Taya had slightly wavy black hair, she had pale skin with her cheeks a very light pink. Compared to most women her age she was a bit slimmer. Her violet dress reached just below her knees, when she twirled it flared out and seemed to match her wild personality. Just underneath her chest lay a somewhat darker purple ribbon that was tied in a small bow at the front, with floral lace bordering the top and bottom of the dress. The dress sat above the chest and went under her arms.
She went into her top drawer of her bed side table and rummaged around until she found the small book she called her diary. She went and sat back on her bed with her diary and a small quill and ink.
April 24th
Dear Diary,
I have to get away from this place, I’m so sick and tired of being told what to do all the time.
I will dearly miss my father, Chay and Dante but I cannot live like this. I don’t like to have an 8 year old around that thinks she is more superior than I. I wish Ailith never had that stupid child! In fact I wish my mother never had Ailith.
I will leave tonight when I can sneak out so no one will know till the morning. Though I will not be able to take all my possessions I will take the things that are dear to me including the things my father and brothers have given me over the years.
I would really like to stay but I can’t... I won’t. I wish I could take my brothers with me but alas I cannot, I don’t want to put them in any danger.
After writing this short entry she slipped the diary under her pillow and started in deep thought but could not concentrate and slowly drifted into a slumber.
Later that night Taya awoke with a sudden chill down her spine, she knew this was the time to leave. She grabbed a small leather backpack that she kept in the corner of her room, as she gathered the gifts from her father and brothers and some clothing she quickly remembered her diary that was still under her pillow.
She started to turn the handle of her bedroom door and heard a creak in the kitchen, so she stopped till all was silent. Before long the creaks of the kitchens floor boards had stopped, all was quiet and so she continued her sneaking out of the house.
Taya opened the front door and crept out, silently shuting the door behind her. Then she thought to her self ‘I’m free... for once in my life.’
Plz let me know what u think.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On August 25th 2007 Aegle Said : | |
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a lil bit fast and short, but i like it. keep it up and me posted me |
| On August 24th 2007 PlayMoreWii Said : | |
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Wow, that's really good. Tell me when the next one comes out. |
| On August 24th 2007 Shell00 Said : | |
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I hope you like it. |
