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Drama Created on 9-14-08 Views(144) Story Rating PG13

Saturday, 21st of September.

I got up at 11:00am, still exhuasted from last night's conversation, or dream. I still wasnt sure if it was either. It felt soo real, yett I never thought it could happen. My human brain talked to me the dominate brain. I thought over the 7,976,335 years i was alive, the human brain would get it that it was only there to communicate, to stay hidden. As I walked to my bathroom to get ready I thought about anything that could've prevoked my human brain. The names Maggie. my human brain commented. I stopped, my eyes spread open. Maybe it wasn't a dream... I raced towards the bathroom to find the mirror smashed. Shit, it wasn't real. Back down Human brain, my domaniance commands you. I replied to her. No way. than right than, i knew she would be here in my brain until i could get rid of whatever was causing her to stay awake.

I walked over to the other mirror and morphed into Maggie aka what i look like around Cameron. I shuddered a bit to see her face again. The dream ran through my mind like a movie. I breathed in and began to human-atize my condo. I painted the walls from black to white. than i covered the floor in carpet and placed couches everywhere. I re-did the kitchen i never used and re-did my bed. Than i got dressed in black jeans and a black blouse. The phone went off. I let it ring for a mintue wondering who it was, than i picked it up.

"hello?" i asked in my regular dark proffessional voice.

"Um Maggie?" he sounded scared.

I instantly turned on my human br__MAGGIE! she cutt my thoughts off, and began to talk like maggie. "Oh hey Cameron! Anything wrong?" I asked, back im my happy human voice.

"Uh, kinda. I just don't know where your appartment is! you never told me!" he laughed a little. I responded in a laugh, even though it was not even funny.

"Ohh, its on Chambers street. The big red building. I live on the top floor, the condo." I replied.

"Oh ok. well I'm going to be a few minutes late, I'm all the across the city, ha-ha. I thought you would be somewhere less...dark." he said the last part a little nevous.

"Thats ok! See you later!" i said.

"Yah see ya." he sounded a little disapointed. Maggie wanted to ask him why, but I didnt care for the thing.

"You ok?" i asked. DARN YOU MAGGIE!!!!

"Oh, its just..." he breathed out. "My father died on Chambers Street, it was a freak accedent. The police only found his bones and a few traces of flesh left. They said it was robbers mugged and killed him, than hungry dogs and rats ate him, but i know a dogg would have taken bones you know? And I never really believed the police man, something inside of me tells me that he was murdered." oh shit, it was one of us. I just knew it.

"I'm SO sorry!" I said sympatheticly. "We should go__" that stupid human cutt me off!

"No no no! its ok. I'm fine!!" he said. Than, cleverly he said good bye and hung up so i wouldnt be able to argue. Not that I wanted to, Maggie did.

Oh you know you like this one. He's kinda sweet dont cha think? Maggie asked me.

No, No human is sweet. They're all just dirty scum we need to get rid off. Imediatly. i replied.

Hmph. she said defeatedly.

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On November 13th 2008 matabooa Said :
matabooa oh this thing is killing me two people in one body. its well writen, but very mentaly complex
On September 18th 2008 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 Keeps up the great work!!
On September 15th 2008 mypoeticrage Said :
mypoeticrage hmmm ima subscribe, this story definately caught my attention. thumbs up!
On September 15th 2008 RaneDropss Said :
RaneDropss This is awsome! i love it like ALOT i need more!
On September 14th 2008 momoleighann Said :
momoleighann i really like this story, is very interesting, its like she has a personality dissorder but hen again she doesnt, so how did she come to be that way, did the monster just take over her body or something?
On September 14th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh "maggie"likes him