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Blind. chapter 15

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Romance Created on 9-6-08 Views(149) Story Rating PG13

"So did you go, like, all the way?" Max asked after i told him what happened last night with Abby.

"No, we stopped and played twister," i replied saracastically. "WHAT THE HELL DO YOU THINKK?!"

"ohh...Finaly!! soo, was it good, or like everything else?" 

"it was undescribable."

"Niiiccee!" he held up his hand for a high five. i smiled and hit it.

"Well, I'll see you later i gotta go meet Abby at Musical Alliance Class."

"See you later my man!"

"yah see ya."

 

When i got to Music Alliance, I saw Abby flirting with another guy. I instantly wanted to kill them both. No wait, slowly and painfuly torcher the guy and kill Abby. I quickly strided over to them.

"Hey, Abby" i said to her while giving the death stare to the guy.

"Oh, hi Chirs."

"Hey Chirs," said the guy who i suddenly noticed was Jake.

"Jake?"

"Thats me!"

"What are you doing??"

"Just talking to Abby over here, doesnt she look lovely today?"

"yah real beautiful." i mumbled. Abby looked over to me (well at past my shoulders) and gave me a stare. i stared back.

"Can I talked to you after class Chris?" Abby said annyoed.

(Fast-forward to after class)

"So what do you want to talk about?" i asked.

"What were you....WHY were you doing that in class?!" she whispered angrily.

"Why are we whispereing" i whispered back.

"Answer my question." she said through her teeth. i took a deap breath in and out.

"cause i love you." i mumbled.

"what?"

"Cause i dont like Jake. And What happened to us?"

"Were just make out friends." she said and walked away.

asGJOGLJSPGKO2872AJO#$!PGJWEPJOAWFJAOPJ!@#%@%#FAPOJFOPJWAOJ !!!! !!! !!!! !! ? i thought.

 

 

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"SHE DID WHAT?!!!!!!!" Max said incredulously.

"She tottaly flirted with Jake. I mean COME ON jake?! he has like every std known to man!" i said.

"Ugh, and he didnt even like her when she was ugly..."

"She was never ugly!" i said protecting Abigal.

"But STILL!"

"yahh.."

"stupid Jake. Wanna hire a preffessonal Rappest to rape him for us?"

"Nah, he might rape us...Anyway rapping isnt that bad."

"But Molesting, Now thats horrible!" we both said in unison than laughed.

"I'm Sorry dude. She was really special. i mean you made TWO songs about her... Now thats special."

"Yah, well shes my inspiration." speaking of inspiration i thought. "Hey i gotta, uh, walk this out. ill see you later."

"Bye man, dont go far."

"ok." i said and walked out the door. I knew exactly where i was going, and exactly where i would find one. I basically ran there so i wouldnt forget my song. I got there, the stage where my first audition was, where i met Abby, where everything started. I got on stage and sat down on the piano and began to play. (go here to listen: http://view.playlist.com/12072731915)

"Why Do You allways have to make those crazy songs about me!" Abby yelled from the middle of the isle. She was in tears, trying to hold it in.

"Because..."

"Because why just tell me already god damnit!"

"BECAUSE I LOVE YOU! I TRUELY DO. FROM THE FIRST GOD DAMN MOMENT I SAW YOUR EYES, FROM THE FIRST MOMENT I KISSED YOUR LIPS, AND FROM THE FIRST MOMENT I FUCKING HEARD YOUR BEAUTIFUL VOICE." i yelled back and slammed on the piano to try and chase my tears away. 

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On November 13th 2008 mlepaige Said :
mlepaige amazing
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On September 6th 2008 RaneDropss Said :
RaneDropss and i just needed to comment on how much i giggled when i got to the rape and molest part, and the whole twister thing made me laugh again lol that was hilarious
On September 6th 2008 Ashlev2008 Said :
Ashlev2008 lol i believe ranedrops is like your number 1 fan lol xD but she is correct that last part was just like perfect !!
On September 6th 2008 RaneDropss Said :
RaneDropss oh my god shannon! i'm like gunna cry i just know it aww that was amazing. it was written perfectly. the last thing he just said was written perfectly. it wasnt too sappy and it was just ugh perfect! lol