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 Created on 9-3-08
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Chapter One: The Audition.
Ok this was it, the Audition. This just might be the first day of my new life; away from my family [score], away from my 'girlfriend' [sweet], and away from the pressures of school [hallelujah!]. I griped my guitar, held my breath, and walked on stage. The audience was three judges and a couple of students with nothing better to do than watch newbees perform. I leaned into the microphone and said,
"Hey, I'm Christofer Drew, but you can call me Chis." I winked and heard someone giggle. I drew my hand back to guide the audience’s eyes to my partner-in-crime. "This is my band mate, and he does the effects."
He smiled and yelled "Hiya, I'm Max Richards."
"Ready?” I whispered to him
"Set.." he replied quietly.
I laughed and whispered "Go" and began to play my tunes.
(go to this link to hear : http://www.playlist.com/node/45275052)
When I was done, I looked up from my beat-up old guitar and saw at least 30 more people, or should I say girls, in the room screaming their lungs out. Yep, I'm gunna love this school. I looked at the judges with a seductive smile on.
"So, am I in?"
"Well, your sound is very modern, and this is a classical school." An old guy with a long beard and tiny John Lennon style glasses on said with a British accent "But, I guess we can mix up the style." He said. I looked to the other judges and they were smiling so I guess the old man spoke for all of them. YES! IM IN!!!! I yelled in my head. I high-fived Max as walked triumphantly off stage. Than I saw her. She had Blues Brothers Dark black sunglasses on and a black to-to dress with rainbow high-socks on and she had color striks in her dark brown hair that matched the socks. In other words, She’s got style. But the best part of her, was the instant flame I felt all over my body as I saw, well stared at her. And I knew I had to have her, I had to love her, I had to make her happy, I had to do whatever she wanted, I HAD to marry her. Woaahhh that last thought was kind of freaky, I think that’s gunna be in the back of my head for a while...
Anyway, I gave my seductive smile to her that no girl can resist. but she just stood there, not even noticing me. IT WAS DRIVING ME CRAZYY!!
"Hey, I'm Chris.” I said.
"yah, hi." she answered, still un-noticing me.
"I was wondering if--"
"Wait, you were going to ask me, a complete stranger out?!"
"uh yah--"
she laughed "wow, you must be desperate." than she walked past me and on to the stage.
Did loose my mojo or something?! Max started to laugh.
"What?" I said
"You should see your face! It looks like a car just hit it!” he started to laugh hysterically again. "I didn’t expected you would react like this when you got dumped for the first time, ITS HILARIOUS!" and he almost fell on the floor laughing.
"Yah har-de-har-har very funny" I grabbed his shirt and dragged him off stage.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
When I finally let go off Max, we reached our dorm. It was awesome! We each got our own mini-fridge, bed, and closet. It was way better than my room, where you had to share two of those things and one you didn’t even have!
“Ready to try out our beds?” max said.
“Oh yah” I replied. We both jumped up and clobbered our beds and max broke his bed frame. I laughed
“SHITT!” he said.
“Hey, at least now you’ll know what it’s like to sleep in china!” I laughed, but instead of laughing max chucked a pillow at me. I grabbed the pillow and looked at his evil face smiling at me. “This means WAR!!!” and chucked pillows at him. We ended up in a huge pillow war (we don't say fight, it’s too girlie) with two dorms joining in. Than our dormitory guard came in, he was really tall and really skinny most of the dorm guys called him Mr. Pencil so I felt inclined to do the same. “Hey there Mr. Pencil!” I said, hiding my weapon (pillow).
“What is all this ruckus boys?” he said in a gay-but-not voice.
“I do not know,” I answered and walked over to him and put my arm around his shoulder “but I think, I sense some more ruckus-ness about to happen right now” and chucked my hidden pillow at him, everyone laughed except him.
“DETENTION!” he yelled and pointed toward me.
* * * * * * * * * *
Since this school was really old, detention was on Saturdays from 7 to 12. There were four other people in detention other than me (wow what a Breakfast Club moment!) but I only noticed one. It was that one girl who didn’t notice me, who looked straight past my shoulders even when I was talking to her, that same girl who rejected me. She was wearing a striped shirt with suspenders on and tan shorts, and she was still wearing sunglasses so I couldn’t see her eyes. I smiled at her as she FINALLY looked at me when I walked across her table to sit next to her.
“Hey remember me?” I said. She turned her head so that her ear was facing my eyes.
“Oh you, why cant you sit somewhere else so you can save yourself from rejection again ok?” she said.
“You didn’t seem like you had a problem when you saw me come over to sit next to you.” I said smartly. There was a subtle pause, she was thinking.
“I was hoping you would turn left” she finally said
“But if I did turn left I’d still be heading towards you, you know you need to learn your left to right.”
“Oh really, and your just so great that you know yours too?” she said sarcastically.
“Yep! And I’ll teach you my little trick in remembering them cause I'm just so nice”
“Wow my hero.” She said sarcastically, again.
“Ok, now hold up your arms and look down at your elbows.” She held up her arms than thought for a moment. She looked straight down past her arms. “Not at you boobs your ARMS!” I said slowly.
“I KNOW!” she repeated slowly and irritated. She took her hand and traced along her arm than reached her hand up to her face and aimed her eyes where she should of looked in the first place. One comment, WEIRD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
“O.k.….” I said confused “now which ever ones in the shape of an L that’s left, the ones that the backwards L is right.”
“Ohh cool!” she said pretending that she was amazed by how much it worked.
“Your not a very good actor you know that?”
“Yahh…” she said sadly.
“Anyway, I’ve never caught your name beautiful.” I winked at her.
“Hold on let me barf first from hearing that complement.” I laughed “its Abigal, and you?”
“I’m Chris, by the way your name is lovely.”
“WOW, smooth! And because of that creative line, you can fuck me.” She said and started to take off her suspenders.
“Really!?” I said enthusiastically.
“No, you idiot.” She put them back on as we laughed together.
For the rest of detention Abby and me talked, got in trouble, than talked some more. I even got her to play Chinese football, but I won cause she always flicked it in the total opposite direction. I thought it was because she didn’t want to play in the first place SO she did it to make me mad. Anyway, for once detention was one of the best days ever of my life, and I’ve had a lot of good days ;].
Chapter Two
“Max hurry up!” I yelled from outside my dorm door.
“Sorry, but nobody’s gunna love you with smelly breath!” he sang badly.
“Oh my god.” I muttered. “Why don't you meet me at the office building ok?” I said louder so he would hear it.
“Fine!” he said back. I wondered around the school area. It looked just like a normal collage with separate buildings for separate subjects and dorm houses, there was huge maples and pines spread across the perimeter. In the middle of the whole school was a courtyard, where people hung out and did they’re homework. As I walked into the courtyard there were tons of girls on beach towels and blankets talking to their friends. I waved and winked at half of them, the other half I sat down and flirted. The conversations I had with them mostly went like this:
“Hey, how you girls doing this fine morning?” I said with a smile on my face as I sat down.
“Great since you came along.” Girl said.
“I’m glad I made your day better.” I winked.
“Oh well that’s great to hear.”
“So, what you here for? Modeling? Dancing?”
Girl giggled, “No I'm here for ______. But why’d you say dancing?”
“Cause you got the hot body to match one.”
“Thanks.” Girl got closer.
“So what’s your name sweetheart?”
“_______, what about you cutie?”
“Wow, what an exotic name, nothing like my stupid name, which is Chris.”
“Thank you, and your name is not stupid. Its sexy.”
Than both spontaneous kiss and phone number or just phone number. So you see how I got bored and decided that it was time to meet up with Max. As I was heading toward the office-building fate came around and I saw Abigal in the hallway, slightly touching the wall, her sunglasses STILL on. I went up to her.
“Hey baby,” and winked.
“Oh, hi.” She replied casually looking straight ahead, not at me.
“Sooo, where you heading?”
“The office building.”
“Me Too!” I said happily
“Oh great…”
“So why you going there? Taking the tour too?”
“Uhh, no. I'm trying to change my schedule.”
“Oh why?”
“Cause I want to, Mr. Nosy.”
“Why wont you tell me?” I pleaded.
“Cause…”
“Because your trying to change all your classes to the same time as mine so you can see me everyday all the time?” as I said that I pulled her closer to me with my arm wrapped around her shoulder which made her other hand not touching the wall.
“HEY! GET OFF ME!” she wiggled out of my grip and scrambled back to the wall again. I ended up spinning her by accident and she ending up saying a lot of ‘bad words.’
“Calm down It was just a guess.” I said panicked. She started to walk forward.
“Am I walking the same direction as before?” she asked.
“What?”
“JUST ANSWER THE DAMN QUESTION!”
“Yes-yes you are!”
“Thank god.” She said relived. “Never do that again!”
“Ok! Mom.” I mumbled. The rest of the walk to the office was silent and awkward. I wanted to do something, ANYTHING, to get her to talk again but couldn’t.
Chapter Three
The tour was the most boring-est thing EVER! Even with Max and I checking out the girls and eying the guys we needed to impress. I really couldn’t take it anymore so I asked if I could go to the bathroom, and went into the fire exit instead. The room was small and only contained stairs going up and down, it smelt like old beer/wet dog/B.O. I held my breath and began to walk up the stairs, two at a time. When I reached the highest level I walked out into the roof. It was really beautiful, it had a good view of the sunset and someone already been up here put a whole bunch of flowers everywhere. I decided to make this my sanctuary. Throughout my life I had two main sanctuaries, one in my house and the other at school. With a HUGE family and tons of peer pressure I just couldn’t handle it all, all the time! I had to get out. And with a sanctuary came a secret, and that was to NEVER tell anyone about it, not even my mom or girlfriend! Nobody could know. And I never wanted anyone to know.
So now I had three main sanctuaries, and personal this one was my favorite.
Chapter Four
My room was perfect, the classes were perfect, and the ladies fell all over me, perfect. But only one thing aggravated me and swept me off my feet was Abigal. She was confusing yet, Understandable. And she was the only girl that resisted my charm. From the very first day we met, backstage after my audition, she barely noticed me! IT DROVE ME INSANE!! and it still does. Every girl noticed me, and even some boys [ewww] but no not her; she was just way too 'cool' for me. whatever I should just forget her and live my life happily, its not like I'm ever going to see her again...
I sat down in my musical alliance class, looked at all the students and saw Abigal, two chairs away from me. she was looking out the window, the light glimmering off her skin making her look warm and touchable and above all, beautiful. that was the best part was, that she wasn’t like most girls I’ve dated, she never wore make-up, never. which was way more attractive than the fake faces girls put on every morning. What the hell, how can I stop thinking about her, she’s so perfect, yet not and that makes her even more perfect. I barely even talked to her and she was perfect! Was I that shallow?! No, I am not shallow [wow, I just argued with myself] I just got to get to know her that’s right. maybe she’s one of those girls who have to know a guy to like me.
"Hey" I said to her.
She turned around "oh, you again. Come to try and woe me again??"
"Look, I’ve come to be your friend."
"HA, funny. I know your type. Your the type that dates girls for the hell of it"
"I don’t date girls for-"
"Than you wanna be friends with benefits...?"
"If you want" I said seductively
"See!" she threw up her arms "That’s exactly what a guy like that would say!"
There was a silent pause; she began to turn around again..."WAIT!" she turned back around surprised. “What if I.... uh… wanna change me was?" And I gave the most fakest smile in the universe.
"Really??" there was a pause "Wait, why should I believe you!? I barely know you.."
"That’s what I'm trying to do. get to know you."
She flinched and replied "I don’t know..."
"OK CLASS! HUSH UP, HUSH UP." a tall women with a red hair in a messy ponytail yelled. "I am Mrs.Fitz and I will be your teacher for the rest of the year. And since this is Musical Alliance we will be learning how to work as a team! Music is like a sport..." as she dragged on I couldn’t help but thinking what was wrong with Abigal. Why was she so....un-trusting? maybe it was me...
"Now, for your groups. we will be switching them every week. and since this is a small class, you might reunite with your old group mate. OK the first group mates are....Jamie and Adam. Second, Mark and Emily, Third, Chris and Agigal..."
"So, guess we're team mates, eh?" I whispered to Abigal.
"guess so!" She said sarcastically.
I laughed, and she mumbled to herself.
Now, school was perfect.
Chapter five
"Come on!" Abigal begged, "Why can’t we do my song?"
"Its way too depressing, that’s why." I replied, "We do mine."
"Well yours is just about some stupid girl."
"She's not stupid!" I said defensively.
"Um, YAH SHE IS!" she said angrily. "If your 'girlfriend' gets a C its like Hell freezed over!"
"Jennie is not my girlfriend,” I said
"Than what is she? You guys never stop making out..."
"That’s what she is, a make-out-friend"
"A make-out-friend? Where did you get that one 'GirlsAreToys.com'"
"No, I got it from 'IMadeItUp.com'"
"Whatever...god I hate arguing, its a waste of hearing."
"Hearing? Isn’t it supposed to be breathe?"
"Yah, whatever..."
"Your a very strange girl did you know that?" I laughed a little.
"Yah I know. But I'm Proud!" she said and stuck her arm in the air like Superwoman.
I laughed "But I like it" I said softly as I brushed my hand against her delicate cheek. she smacked it.
"Watch it bub, I’m not a Touch-Her-Face kind of friend.” I started to laugh hysterically. She tried to hide it but couldn’t help but laugh herself.
“Ok, ok back to business.” I said calming down, and wiping the tears from my face.
“Alright, so we are doing my song, you wanna practice?” she said casually.
“No, no, no, no! We are doing MY song.” I corrected.
“Rock, Paper, Scissors, Shoe?”
“Fine.”
“Rock, Paper, Scissors, SHOE!” we said together. She did paper, I did scissors. I wanted to feel the glory when she told me I won, so I waited. She never looked up…I kept waiting.
“Are you gunna tell me or not?” she said impatiently.
“I want to her it from YOUR lips.” I said and smiled evilly.
“Uhm…” she looked down, not even at the direction of our hands. “I won!?” she smiled, a confused hopeful smile.
“No…” I said suspiciously, “I won. Are your eyes ok?”
“Yah I’m fine,” she said quickly gathering her things “We’ll practice same time same place? Kk, see ya.” And rushed out the door.
“that was weird…” I mumbled to myself.
Blind. Chapter six
As I sat on the floor, thinking about what just happened with Abigal, Max came into our dorm.
"hey!" I said "Where've you been?"
"Just practicing with my partner, same as you." he said.
"Ohh yah. You got Miss. User. Sorry about that dude, I would ask to switch but you know that I'm trying to get into Abigal's pants." I said apologetically.
"Yah, I know" he replied. "But Brittney isn’t that bad actually, so don’t worry about it."
"Wait a sec. She wasn’t mean to you? at all?!"
"Nope. she was really nice, and flirty" he blushed.
"Ohh god."
"What?!"
"Your her next user-boy."
"I am not!" he said offensively.
"Most likely, you are. sorry to say dude. I really am."
"Your just jealous that I finally got a girl!!" Uh-Oh, he’s getting mad.
"Ok Ok. I’m sorry, can we just forget this? I was just trying to tell you my true opinion like a true friend would."
"ok fine...." he stomped to his bed and slammed down on it "I'm going to bed."
"Good Night?"
"Yah-yah."
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The Next Morning, I was home(well dorm) alone. It was a Saturday and Max was off with Brittney to the Spa (wonder who's paying...). Today I could either see Abigal or Dance around in my underwear. The second choice was tempting BUTT there was always this pull towards Abby. So, I went to the girl’s dormitories. Almost every girl was waving and flirting, some even pretending to forget to put they're shirt/pants on (sweet) I just smiled and nodded, looking at my choices for the year and planning them out. thinking in my head about what it would be like to "date" them and how much praise I would get from the guys when I told them which girl I had next. But for now, my one goal was Abigal. I knew the guys really wouldn’t care, and it wasn’t a way to start the year, but maybe I could spice her up a bit.
As I knocked on her door, I heard fumbling and a "how is it?"
"Your one and only!" I answered.
"oh great" I heard her say, than she opened the door and stared right past my shoulders, she had her famous dark tinted glasses on and pajamas on. I loved her pjs, boxer shorts on which meant a girl who really doesn’t care and the shorts also have easy access if you know what I mean. She had a low tank top on which should her Amazingly perfect shaped tits. not too big, not to small, firm and grip able ;]. "What do you want?" she said with a tone that said "get the fuck away!"
"You" I said and grabbed her waist and pulled her towards me. she placed her hands on my chest. "Ooo" I said and smiled. her hands crawled up my chest towards my face, and when both of her warm soft hands were placed on my cheeks she swung back and BAM!!, hit my cheek, and pushed my off of her.
"Scumbagg!" she yelled and slammed the door.
I knocked lightly at her door again, "sorry, sorry. that was really rude" I whispered so no one would hear. "I just couldn’t control myself your so....beautiful" I said with true meaning this time. I really NEVER called a girl 'beautiful' and meant it; I just said it to them to make them happy.
Her door cracked open slightly. Put my arm at the top of the doorframe and leaned my head in, with a curious face on and my hair lightly falling on my face. "Do you forgive me?" I whispered again, my head in turned toward the back of the door where Abby was leaning against. Our faces so close I felt her breathe on my face. For the first time ever she was looking at me, I wanted so badly to take her glasses off so I could see her eyes, but I couldn’t. I got in closer to move in for the kiss, but when she saw that she quickly opened the door (which hit my face) and said "Come in!" with a smile. I walked in slowly looking at her and rubbing my face.
When will she ever trust me I thought.
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