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Chapter 10- Who's Telling The Truth?
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They heard laughter coming from the room in front of the car. Room 19B. Elijah walked over an pounded on the door. They werent surprised when they seen who opened it. Janice. Krissy stepped in front of Elijah and slapped Janice so hard she fell to the ground. Thats when a man walked out an pushed Elijah against the car, an punched him in the face. Eliajh stood up an wiped thje blood from his lip. An said to the man, "You asked for it" And Elijah reached in the back of his jeans an pulled out his gun. "Janice get inside!" the man yelled. "DJ,NO!" Janice yelled as she made her way to the motel room. Krissy walked over to Eliajh an stood behind him. "Now give me my daughter and I won't have to shoot you." Elijah said in a stern voice. DJ just laughed, "Daughter what daughter?, Janice did you hear him, he says he has a daughter! Thats funny right there!" Elijah stepped up to DJ an held the gun to his head. "Now listen here you jack ass you give me my daughter right now, or your little girlfriend will witness your death." Eliajh clicked the gun off of safty. DJ threw his hands up, "Whoa man, shes not even here." Eliajh backed off. "Where is she!! Tell me right now!!" DJ looked straight into Eliajhs eyes as he leaned closer an whisperd in his face, "Shes dead!" Elijah passed out. Right then an there he blanked out and fell backwards. Krissy ran to him. And as soon as she did, DJ and Janice made a run for it. DJ hopped in the drivers seat of the car with McKenzies sweater in it. Then Janice hopped in the passengers seat and they sped away.
Authors Note~~ sorry its short, I have a bad head ache and aint feelin too good. But i thot id write some more so ya'll dont think i stopped writtin it. ~~ Comments and rates greatly appreciated!!
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| On August 11th 2007 starryboo Said : | |
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I really like it!!! |


