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Chapter 5- Pop a question.
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Elijah put the car in drive, and drove away from the school. "Hey McKenzie, this is Krissy." Elijah said. "Hi McKenzie!!" Krissy said as she turned around in her seat to look at her. "I heard a lot about you." McKenzie smiled and just giggled. That is so cute. She looks alot like Elijah. She has the green eyes he had when he was little too. I wonder if they will turn blue like her daddies did.Krissy thought as she just stared at the little girl sitting in her car seat.
"Where are we going??" Krissy was getting curious. "You will just have to wait and see." He said with a smirk on his face. Krissy sighed. They had been driving for about 20 minutes now when they pulled up to a beautiful two story house. It had big french doors, and white paneled windows. A Beautiful wrap around porch. And a remarkable garden along then flag stone walk way that led to the frnch doors. "Its beautiful!" Krissy said as she stared at the beautiful house. "Who lives here?" She asked looking at Elijah confused.He smiled. "Welcome to my new home." She ran around the car and jumped into his arms. "How, whered you get the money?" All he could do was smile. He turned around and unbuckled McKenzie from her car seat, and helped her out. The three of them walked hand in hand, with Elijah in the middle of his two girls.The walked down the flag stone walk way and through the french doors. In the living room there was a small mattress in the corner and a few boxes of McKenzies stuff along the wall. "Her grandmother bought it as soon as she found out I would take McKenzie." Elijah explained to Krissy as she looked around the huge house.
McKenzie yawned and rubbed her sleepy eyes."Daddy, Im tired." She said as she tugged on Elijahs shirt. "Ohhh come here." he picked her up and layed her on the mattress. She fell asleep almost instantly. "Shes had a long day." He whispered to Krissy. "Both of you had. You should take a nap to you look exhausted." Krissy whispered back as she walked toward Elijah. "I will...later. But first Im giving you a grand tour." He slightly laughed. Krissy smiled and took his hand.
First Elijah showed her around the first floor. There was a dining room, the kitchen, a living room, and a play room.Which all had hard wood floors.Then he took her upstairs to McKenzie's room, and told her how he was going to paint it pink, and put little flowers along the walls. Then he took her to the master bedroom. It was huge. White walls with a tan colored carpet. "Its beautiful" Krissy whispered. Elijah took both of Krissy hands, "And it could be ours" He emphasized ours. Krissy narrowed her eyes..."What do you mean?" Thats when Elijah got down on one knee, took small square box from his jeans pocket and grabbed her left hand. "Will you marry me?"
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Please Login to post comments| On August 5th 2007 starryboo Said : | |
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I love this....this series is wonderfull.... |
| On August 4th 2007 Oddessy65 Said : | |
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AGH!! *falls off cliff* Jeez you can't end it like... well, actually, I've done the EXACT same thing, end it on the proposal, so I guess I can't really freak out, but... At least I wrote the next one like immediately!! Hurry up I gotta know what she says!! *~xODDx~* |
| On August 4th 2007 panthersrule Said : | |
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what the heck?!?!? how could you just end it like that?!?!?! wow ur a great writer. lol |
