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El Chupacabra (Chapter 3)

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            It had been about two hours that The group had been scattered around the forest, and two hours that were spent trying to find one an other.

            Pancho jumped over logs, pushed passed trees, and ran through the dead leaves, thinking that the blood-curling scream he heard was Marco. He couldn’t imagine what he would feel if something happened to Marco.

            He ran through the forest, with sweat dripping down his face, and his teeth clenched. He finally stopped to rest, breathing heavily. “Marco. Marco…where are you? Please be okay.” Pancho talked to himself, and put his hands on his knees, hunched over and tired. “Marco.”

            It was then the sound of crunching leaves could be heard only a few feet from Pancho.            

            “What the.” Pancho stood straight, holding his breath and shining his flashlight in the direction of the sound. “Hello?” Pancho began to walk towards the sound, pulling out a pocketknife from his belt. He walked over to the noise and pushed past a few bushes to finally come face to face with…

            Juan.           

            Well at least it seemed like Juan. He lay on the floor, lifelessly, with his chest opened up and his eyes wide open. Pancho covered his mouth and turned away, as the smell overwhelmed him.            

            “What in the hell!” Pancho turned away quickly and began to run in the other direction.

            Meanwhile: Gabriel and Marco ran through the forest, trying to navigate their way back to safety.

            They ran and ran and ran, until finally, they had reached the house.

            “Hurry!” Shouted Gabriel, running into the house, with Marco following shortly behind. Both ran in, and collapsed on the sofa, breathing fast and sweating uncontrollably.

            KNOCK. KNOCK.

            Gabriel sat up, looking at the door.

            “Who do you think it is?” Marco sat up looking at the door, shaking nervously

            “I don’t know Marco,” Gabriel reached into his pocket pulling out a small blade “But we’re about to find out!” Gabriel opened the door, reading the blade, and holding it to Tommy’s face.

            “Whoa! Whoa! Calm down man! It’s me, Tommy. Put the blade down ESE.”

            Gabriel sighed, Relieved, and put the blade down. “Why did you come back to the house?” Gabriel asked, with a smile as big as the moon growing on his face. “Well I followed you two!” Tommy stepped inside and patted Marco on the back. “I was scared out of my mind dog, you should’ve seen it!!! I heard that scream, and Then wham… I ran for my life homes, I ran ---!!!” Just then something came out from the forest and ran toward him or her, pushing past everyone, and getting into the house.

            “Pancho?!” Gabriel said quizzically.           

            “Hurry get inside! All of you!” Pancho hollered, out of breath, obviously shaken. Tommy Walked inside, closing the door behind him, locking it.

            “What is it Pancho?” Marco walked over to him, putting his hand on Pancho’s shoulder.

            “It--- It--- It---.” Pancho stuttered, shaking uncontrollably.

            “It was---“

            RARK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

            Everyone turned the head in unison, looking at the door of the house.

            “It’s here.” Pancho said solemnly

 

END CHAPTER 3

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On April 28th 2008 Aleera00 Said :
Aleera00 This is great,I really want to read some more. KMP.