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| On November 20th 2007 Lindseyk1989 Said : | |
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I really love it! You really do put a lot of images in your writing...it's like when I read it I can see it in my head and imagine how it would be.
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| On June 17th 2007 mcihellejane Said : | |
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I'm intrigued already....You did a great job keeping attention throughout and also leaving the reader needing more. |
| On May 28th 2007 brokenwing3 Said : | |
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excellent!!! Love the action, good way to start off! |
| On May 15th 2007 onaipwolf Said : | |
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This is an awesome story. I was captivated the entire time. I personally find it difficult to make my fantasy stories believable, but you did a very nice job in making everything seem very natural. |
| On May 2nd 2007 1luv1hartbrek Said : | |
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It sounds really good so far. I like these kind of stories and I enjoyed this one emensely. Keep up the good work and let me know when you right the next part. |


