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Sweet Treat 11

Hey everybody, sorry for taking so long. I hope this one wasn't to long. PLEASE READ THE BOLD PRINT BELOW.
Romance Created on 8-10-08 Views(611) Story Rating G

Hi so I'm going to start the first Testriffic contest! PLEASE DO NOT COPY DAMNIT I HATE THAT. So in either this or Another Kind Of Love will have an underlined bold print that is a lyric to one of my favorite songs. When you see that, who ever sents me a message first and gets the correct andswer wins and I will have to rate all of your stuff. I will do it more than 5 times and if you win more thatn once remember that I have another account. I will not be anouncing when the underlined line will come up so you just have to read the stories and good luck. So have fun (:

Bridget Void and Nicholas Dowell laughed and stood up quickly and ran to the back porch. Madison Dowell came up seconds later with Pookie Dowell (the dog) in her arms.

“Woops, sorry guys. Forget we had sprinklers.” Nick smiled.

“Yeah, me too. Well since Pookie is already wet. I’ll go give him his B-a-t-h. Shhh.” Maddie winked at them and proceeded to the house.

When she was gone Nick turned to Bridget. “Sorry about the sprinklers. Did I get you wet?” he asked and observed her clothes.

“Yeah the back of my shirt is. One of the pouts (that’s what I call the black things that spray the water. Lol idk what its really called) was under me so its pretty wet. I’ll go to my house and get a t-shirt.”

She started to turn away when Nick grabbed her. “No! Don’t go I’ll just give you one of mine.” He was afraid that Andrew saw that kiss and might not want her to come back over.

Maddie came out again but Pookie was no where in site. “Well, Pookie fell asleep in the tub.” she laughed. “Nick, Christy just called. Can I go over there? Please?!”

“That depends on whether you drained the tub before letting Pookie sleep there or not.” Nick answered.

“Yes, I did. I’m not that stupid.” Nick gave her his approval and she jumped. “Yay! Thanks I’ll be back later.”

“Be careful crossing the streets!” Nick yelled as Maddie rushed off. He heard her yell “Yeah, yeah.” back to him and he sighed.

Bridget put her hand on his shoulder. “Hey, she’ll be okay. She’s a big girl.”

“She’s four. But anyways how bout that shirt?” She gave it a thought then finally nodded.

They walked inside the house to Nick’s room. It was blue and green (boys’ color). He had a queen sized bed, just like hers. But instead of the bed loaded with teddy bears, like hers is, it was loaded with pillows. Long ones, short ones, circle, square. You name it.

His room was big and had a computer desk on one corner, A small TV in another, door that probably leads to the bathroom, and then his bed.

“Nice room.” Bridget commented and plopped on his bed.

Nick tossed a shirt to her and went to the bathroom. “Be right back.” he said before disappearing. Bridget took of her soaked shirt and left her with her pink polka doted bra.

She sniffed Nick’s t-shirt it smelled like laundry soap and Nick, spicy and sweet. Bridget closed her eyes and took in the scent then she heard a laugh. “What on earth are you doing?”

She opened her eyes to see Nick with no shirt on. She remembered the first time she saw him. Only in boxers and skin. He had biceps, not big but enough for you to see. Four pack and a tight stomach.

“I was just…uh.” She gave him a confused look and then shrugged. “Uh…sniffing you scent?”

Nick laughed again but his eyes turned smoky. “Why?” He grinned and Bridget just shrugged. Nick took a step forward and her eyes widened but she didn’t do anything.

He took another step then another, then another till he was right in front of her. Then he took the t-shirt from her hands and tossed it to the ground.

Speechless, she looked up at him just in time for him to push her flat on her back on the bed.

PLEASE READ THE BOLD PRINT ABOVE.

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On August 20th 2008 Prqt2nv Said: 
Prqt2nv ahhh im pretty sure he's gonna mess things up like that. oof. i hope not
On August 15th 2008 blondechickx3 Said: 
blondechickx3 haha wow.its great.
On August 14th 2008 monkey892 Said: 
monkey892 I really like it, It is sweet. Why didn't you keep me posted!!?? Well if you would kmp that would be appreciated! Thhhxx
On August 12th 2008 justthegirlxox Said: 
justthegirlxox well, this wouldn't be the first contest, they do them alot on the social parts. they used to do them alot a few years back. just letting you know, because they arn't the first. but i do like your story. (:
On August 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: 
xXPunkGirl09Xx yeah i agree. all i say is wow.
On August 10th 2008 hihigogo Said: 
hihigogo wow.
On August 10th 2008 sakat38 Said: 
sakat38 omg.......
On August 10th 2008 bowzlady1 Said: 
bowzlady1 Ooo will they? Or will they not? And that must be a pretty safe neighborhood, when I was 4 I went NOWHERE w/o parental supervision or my brothers.... But I love it!!!
On August 10th 2008 sportsluver33 Said: 
sportsluver33 i love it you are such a great writer haha
On August 10th 2008 Atlangel5 Said: 
Atlangel5 Now I'm speechless LOL great story.
On August 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said: 
yeaitzJess please write the next one as soon as possible, and that was a good idea with the lyrics.
On August 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said: 
yeaitzJess WOAH!!!!!!! she better say no, lol. love it
On August 10th 2008 spazfosho Said: 
spazfosho Haha, so cute! :D
On August 10th 2008 MajorBandee Said: 
MajorBandee whoa! hahaha! this is great! keep writing.
On August 10th 2008 analyssarenae Said: 
analyssarenae love it!
On August 10th 2008 bluecat62892 Said: 
bluecat62892 love the storie