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Sweet Treat 2
Romance
 Created on 6-13-08
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 Story Rating G
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Okay. So I went from 33 rates to 17. That made me sad ):
But I’ll take what I get.So yesterday, June 6, 2008, was the last day of school!!!!
I am now officially a freshman for high school!
Have a kicking ass summer guys (:
Lets see…skirt? Jeans? Shorts? AGH! Bridget finally decided on jean skirt that had strings coming out on the bottom so it looks like its ripped, but it’s not.
She put on black converse with her black ankle socks and a black t-shirt that had a gray moose and on top of the moose said Abercrombie & Fitch in neon colors. She put on eyeliner and mascara then straightened her hair.
She slipped in her black American Eagle purse with a cell phone, eyeliner, chap stick, mini perfume and wallet.
Bridget walked downstairs to wait for Nick. She sat next to Andrew and Carly. They were watching the movie ‘Just Like Heaven’.
“Can we please turn it off now? It’s boring me to death!” Andrew complained.
“But I love this movie.” Carly pouted and Andrew sighed and kissed her glossy lips. Carly smiled. “Thank you.” then like seeing Bridget for the first time, she looked at me. “Where you going? Date?”
Carly Casadee was beautiful. Long wavy blonde hair and green eyes except they were small and she has to put a lot of eyeliner on. Her lips were pouty and always glossy she. She was skinny but not in a anorexic way. She had great clothes on her great figure. She was perfect.
It was a wonder why she picked Bridget’s brother.
“Yeah. I didn’t know Maddie had an older brother. Did you guys?” Bridget asked them and they both shook their heads. “Where’s mom and dad?”
“Mom’s out with friends and will probably be back in an hour. Dad’s at work. Again.” Andrew said. “Hurry and leave so I can have some alone time with Carly, please.”
Carly and Andrew has been going out for…well it’s going to be 2 years in about 3 weeks. They both go to NYU, studying nursing.
“Andrew!” Carly squeaked.
“Ew. Gross, you just scarred me for life. You’re 21, Andrew. Get a place of your own.” Bridget commented and grabbed some chocolate kisses and ate two at the same time.
“Fatty.” Andrew snorted.
“Hey! I am not. “ she said.
Carly laughed. “I wish I had an older brother.”
“You can have mine.” Bridget said and grabbed more kisses and stuck them in her purse.
“She already does.” Andrew said and looked at Carly. Their gazes on each other told Bridget there would be a kissing scene coming up. She wished she could have love like that one day.
Bridget smiled and jealousy came. “But that’d be weird and gross because then you’d be going out with your brother.” Andrew threw a pillow at her and she laughed.
The door bell rang and they both snapped out of their love scene. Andrew got up to answer the door. “If its your date, Bridge, I’m punching him.”
“Andrew!” Carly and her ran to him right when he opened the door.
Nick stood there in jeans and skater shoes and Hollister shirt. He looked nervous but happy. “Uh, hi.”
Andrew puffed up his chest and Carly punched it. “You ass. That’s not going to scare him.” She turned to Nick. “Hi. I’m Carly. I’m Andrew’s girlfriend. Andrew is Bridge’s older brother.”
“Oh, hi. Nice to meet you.” Nick replied.
“Uh-huh. Where are you taking Bridget?” Andrew asked. Bridget sighed.
“I’m taking her to the movies then probably ice cream afterwards.” Nick replied.
“Ohh! You mean, Sweet Treat?” Carly asked. When Nick nodded, she turned to Andrew. “We should go there, Andrew! They have really good ice cream. Please.” Carly kissed him for affect.
Andrew sighed and kissed her pouting lips. “Fine. I’ll do anything if we could just stop watching that damned movie.”
Tell me what you think and please rate.
But I’ll take what I get.So yesterday, June 6, 2008, was the last day of school!!!!
I am now officially a freshman for high school!
Have a kicking ass summer guys (:
Lets see…skirt? Jeans? Shorts? AGH! Bridget finally decided on jean skirt that had strings coming out on the bottom so it looks like its ripped, but it’s not.
She put on black converse with her black ankle socks and a black t-shirt that had a gray moose and on top of the moose said Abercrombie & Fitch in neon colors. She put on eyeliner and mascara then straightened her hair.
She slipped in her black American Eagle purse with a cell phone, eyeliner, chap stick, mini perfume and wallet.
Bridget walked downstairs to wait for Nick. She sat next to Andrew and Carly. They were watching the movie ‘Just Like Heaven’.
“Can we please turn it off now? It’s boring me to death!” Andrew complained.
“But I love this movie.” Carly pouted and Andrew sighed and kissed her glossy lips. Carly smiled. “Thank you.” then like seeing Bridget for the first time, she looked at me. “Where you going? Date?”
Carly Casadee was beautiful. Long wavy blonde hair and green eyes except they were small and she has to put a lot of eyeliner on. Her lips were pouty and always glossy she. She was skinny but not in a anorexic way. She had great clothes on her great figure. She was perfect.
It was a wonder why she picked Bridget’s brother.
“Yeah. I didn’t know Maddie had an older brother. Did you guys?” Bridget asked them and they both shook their heads. “Where’s mom and dad?”
“Mom’s out with friends and will probably be back in an hour. Dad’s at work. Again.” Andrew said. “Hurry and leave so I can have some alone time with Carly, please.”
Carly and Andrew has been going out for…well it’s going to be 2 years in about 3 weeks. They both go to NYU, studying nursing.
“Andrew!” Carly squeaked.
“Ew. Gross, you just scarred me for life. You’re 21, Andrew. Get a place of your own.” Bridget commented and grabbed some chocolate kisses and ate two at the same time.
“Fatty.” Andrew snorted.
“Hey! I am not. “ she said.
Carly laughed. “I wish I had an older brother.”
“You can have mine.” Bridget said and grabbed more kisses and stuck them in her purse.
“She already does.” Andrew said and looked at Carly. Their gazes on each other told Bridget there would be a kissing scene coming up. She wished she could have love like that one day.
Bridget smiled and jealousy came. “But that’d be weird and gross because then you’d be going out with your brother.” Andrew threw a pillow at her and she laughed.
The door bell rang and they both snapped out of their love scene. Andrew got up to answer the door. “If its your date, Bridge, I’m punching him.”
“Andrew!” Carly and her ran to him right when he opened the door.
Nick stood there in jeans and skater shoes and Hollister shirt. He looked nervous but happy. “Uh, hi.”
Andrew puffed up his chest and Carly punched it. “You ass. That’s not going to scare him.” She turned to Nick. “Hi. I’m Carly. I’m Andrew’s girlfriend. Andrew is Bridge’s older brother.”
“Oh, hi. Nice to meet you.” Nick replied.
“Uh-huh. Where are you taking Bridget?” Andrew asked. Bridget sighed.
“I’m taking her to the movies then probably ice cream afterwards.” Nick replied.
“Ohh! You mean, Sweet Treat?” Carly asked. When Nick nodded, she turned to Andrew. “We should go there, Andrew! They have really good ice cream. Please.” Carly kissed him for affect.
Andrew sighed and kissed her pouting lips. “Fine. I’ll do anything if we could just stop watching that damned movie.”
Tell me what you think and please rate.
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On August 6th 2008 greenytoo Said : | |
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Kmpp |
| On June 20th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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I like it please keep me psoted! |
| On June 19th 2008 BlackRoseVamp1 Said : | |
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Keep me psoted please. Ist great. |
| On June 15th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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i love this story i just wished that they werent going to double date but it doesnt matter PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!!!!!!! |
| On June 14th 2008 JessyMary Said : | |
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this is rele good kmpp!! |
| On June 14th 2008 MissCheerCap Said : | |
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kmp. i get the name now. love it deary
haleylynn |
| On June 14th 2008 LadyVivy Said : | |
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kmp =] |
| On June 14th 2008 blondechickx3 Said : | |
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haha.kmp =] |
| On June 14th 2008 Atlangel5 Said : | |
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Aww........ I have no older brothers but tons of older cousins and its so horrible when they do that "where you taking her and what do you two plan on doing" bit. I love story so KMP plz!!!!! |
| On June 14th 2008 MastaAsh101 Said : | |
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awsome kmp |
| On June 13th 2008 loubear227 Said : | |
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awesome.luv it kmp |
| On June 13th 2008 ilybaby06 Said : | |
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I pretty much love this story lol. I had a brother but, he was 5 years younger so I never got to experience the over-protective brother thing. lol. I like it though it was funny :) Kmp please like usual.:] |
| On June 13th 2008 foxridergirl09 Said : | |
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its really good. it has good detail and it makes me feel like im watching a movie and im actually there... Great job pkmp |
| On June 13th 2008 lonely244444 Said : | |
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I really like it! KMP please! |
| On June 13th 2008 monkey892 Said : | |
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I really like this. I mean it is really cute! |
| On June 13th 2008 thatchickunew Said : | |
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really great job.keep it up! kmp plz! |
| On June 13th 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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i have a brother. only he's younger and has a really huge ego. =D and i don't think i've ever told you, but i like the pictures, kmpp. |
| On June 13th 2008 analyssarenae Said : | |
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That is really really cute. And I agree. I wanna see the pictures cuz I wanna get an idea of what they look like. This is really good so far. Keep me posted! |
| On June 13th 2008 bowzlady1 Said : | |
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I love it. I have 3 older brothers and they r Soo Over protetive!!! |
| On June 13th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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lol that's cute. Sometimes I wish I had an older brother. This story rox kmpp girly! :) |
| On June 13th 2008 kristine1246 Said : | |
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haahha kmp |
| On June 13th 2008 cheerleader725 Said : | |
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its so cute i love it!! KMPP!! |
| On June 13th 2008 ShiningKanin Said : | |
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aww its really cute! i like it! keep me posted please! |
| On June 13th 2008 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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Well I fixed that, rosebrugh. (: They don't have to think of what they look like, I have pictures in my profile (: |
| On June 13th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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you had a little less than you normally do for details but it evened out and people have to think of what they look like bcuz since it has been a while they dont remember what they look like.kmp |
