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Okkay. Did you like the twist?
Yeah, i didn't either but i though i'd slip it in there :]
Trevor's POV
He ran as fast as he could to 24th street and saw the church burning. People had crowded the scene, all of them talking and panicking, but no one did anything but stare. He quickly grabbed someone and said,
"Call 911, somone's in the church." then ran towards the fire. He heard the person he grabbed yell, "What?!? Someone's in there? Somebody call 911. Now! Someone's in there!"
He entered the burning church and looked through the smoke around the room. He couldn't see anything. Jumping over a pile of burning chairs he yelled out her name. "Rox?!? Roxanne?!? Where are you?!?"
He heard faint coughing at the corner and ran towards it, following the sound. He saw her there lying on the floor with a chair stuck to her back. Her clothing was torn and she was bleeding from somewhere unseen. His heart broke at the sight of her.
Panicking, he kneeled down and fastly untied the ropes that connected her to the chair. Once freed, he looked at her, putting his hands on both her cheeks. He felt something rough on her left cheek but ignored it. "Roxy? Honey, are you okay? What did they do to you...?" he picked her up and saw that the lower side of her stomach was bleeding. His baby, he though, the baby he didn't want. What happened to it?
Putting a forearm under her knees and under her shoulders, he quickly ran out of the church, battling fires and flying woods on the way. When he got out He safely, gently dropped her on the wet grass, checking her anywhere else for injuries. The left side of her face was burnt. She was unconsious, but he felt her heartbeat. She's alive! She's a live! but then a sad thought came to him, their baby's dead...
Roxanne's POV
Roxanne woke up from the feeling of falling of a cliff into firey hell. She jerked awake and felt Trevor quickly jump up at the sudden movement. He was holding her hand, he looked tired and sleepy and worried. She looked around. When did i get to a hospital? She looked at Trevor and rasped out, "How long have i been sleeping?"
"Two and a half days. You were just unconsious and had a little bit of injuries but your okay. The docotor said you had to stay in the hospital for about a week for testing just to see if anymore was damaged. I called your parents, they weren't home. They were at a bussiness trip and i couldn't get a hold of them. Sorry." he said and squeezed her hand. "How do you feel?"
She looked at her body, it was connected with wires and beeping noises.
"Like i've been run over buy a truck." she smiled a little to cover the tear falliing from her eyes. He leaned forward to kiss her but she turned away. "I dont have amnesia, Trev. I still remember everything."
He was about to say something when the door opened at a nurse came in. She looked surprised to see Roxanne awake. "Oh, your awake. Let me tell the docotor. She has some news for you. That...well..it's not my job to say...but i'm sorry about it. Oh, well here she is."
As if on cue, Dr. Carter walked in, also shocked to see Roxanne awake. "Oh, hello. Your, awake. Great!" then she looked at Trevor. "I need to talk to her alone, please." Trevor nodded and leaned to try to kiss Roxanne again but she dodged it and looked away. Sighing, Trevor kissed her head and walked away.
Roxanne looked at the doctor. Dr. Carter had an eyebrow raised at the scene with Trevor but then she quickly wiped it away and looked at her with a concern look on her face. "So, before i say anything else. I need to tell you that some cops will come here any minuet now, to ask you questions about what happened.
If you don't remember anything. That's fine. Forgetting things are normal after being unconsious for too long. But don't worry it's not permanent. So yes..." Suddenly the door opened at 2 cops around their 30s walked in. "Hello, Officers. Here she is. Do you want me to stay here or do you want me to leave...?"
"Yes, please. We'll call you back if you are needed.:" When Dr. Carter left, the cops turned to her. "So ma'am. Can you tell us exactly what happened?" Roxanne explained everything starting from the time she left Trevor's house to the time when she fainted when the fire started.
When she was finished, the cops looked at her and nodded. "Do you know those guys?"
"They sounded like the guys who tried to rape me a few days ago, at Disneyland. They got away with it, though." Roxanne started tearing up and the cops nodded then left.
A few minuets later, Trevor walked in with Dr. Carter. "Okay, so one more news couldn't hurt."
Trevor sat down beside Roxanne and held her hand. They looked sad. "What's going on?" Roxanne, asked worriedly.
Dr. Carter looked at Trevor. "Want to tell her?"
Nodding, Trevor looked at her. "We lost our baby, Rox."
Soo member my ruless.
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| On May 4th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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if trevor, that fuckin bastard, hadn't gotten in the way of her or had sex with the other slut everything would be fine |
| On January 4th 2008 Pilot808 Said : | |
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poor roxanne. T_T keep me posted. :D |
| On January 1st 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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Good Story. Please keep me posted. |
| On January 1st 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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Good Story. Please keep me posted. |
| On December 31st 2007 punkdancr Said : | |
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i like it! good job! lol |
| On December 30th 2007 monkey892 Said : | |
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omg i almost cried! i can't belive that he actually said "our baby" it was really sweet, well please keep me posted |
| On December 30th 2007 crzygrl427 Said : | |
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wow. i really love your stories. i've read them all and think they're great. I'm new, and i just posted the intro to a story i'm thinking about writing. I was wondering if you would check it out and tell me what you think. |
| On December 30th 2007 crzygrl427 Said : | |
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wow. i really love your stories. i've read them all and think they're great. I'm new, and i just posted the intro to a story i'm thinking about writing. I was wondering if you would check it out and tell me what you think. |
| On December 30th 2007 crzygrl427 Said : | |
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wow. i really love your stories. i've read them all and think they're great. I'm new, and i just posted the intro to a story i'm thinking about writing. I was wondering if you would check it out and tell me what you think. |
| On December 29th 2007 blondechickx3 Said : | |
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awww.that sad =[
keep me posted though. |
| On December 29th 2007 jasminekaay Said : | |
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aww. keep me posted. |
| On December 29th 2007 cocopuff2005 Said : | |
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... thats sad |
| On December 29th 2007 raetakeninluv1 Said : | |
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i love it keep me posted |
| On December 29th 2007 ALIYAH1994 Said : | |
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I agree with necrosiss...REAL TALK...please keep me posted...it was good |
| On December 29th 2007 katelyncares Said : | |
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its really sad but sweet. im glad roxs ok. keep me posted? |
| On December 29th 2007 BunnyBoy12365 Said : | |
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oh my god, why did they have to lose the baby =( keep me posted tho i love it =) |
| On December 29th 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
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I would not want Trevor telling me the news if I were in her place. 1. He never wanted the baby in the first place so how is he going to flip and act all sympathetic? No, just no. 2. He actually said "our" baby. Pleeaassee, he wanted nothing to do with the kid.
I loved the chapter though keep me posted. |
| On December 29th 2007 Kelso1684 Said : | |
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oh...thats so sad...i almost cried!!! great job tho, keep me posted! |
| On December 29th 2007 heathsgurl94 Said : | |
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aww |
| On December 29th 2007 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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Okkkay. It's a littlle too tiny. Sorry bout that. |


