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Marvin's life #3

Drama Created on 5-19-08 Views(23) Story Rating G

arfter seeing the picture in Moe's draw Marvin put it in his poem and started looking around Moe's room, Marvin did'nt know that much about Moe's life and only relised that moe had a life beside's making his hell arfter looking around the room he saw pictures of Moe's friends and even a picture of Moe kissing a girl he looked at Moe's calender and saw a date that said "My girl Hallie's BDay" "so that's her name" Marvin thought to himself then he went to the address book hopeing to find her number and he did it had her email address and phone number and a picture of her making a funny face, Marvin took Moe's address book aswell then he heard his dad Mike get up so he went back to his bedroom, Marvin was really upset but then relised it was sunday the last day of the weekend so he got dreesed headed out to the mall were he saw Greg kissing some girl, so Marvin walked over and said "hey, Greg" then Greg said "sup, Marv my main man, this is Talia my girlfriend" then Marvin said "I thought you were seeing that over girl" then Greg said "NO, I've only got eye's for Talli you know that I talk about her all the time" then Marvin said "well that's odd I thought you came with that blonde tart to the party last night!" then Greg said "that was Ruth my sister" then Marvin said "Greg!?, you don't have a sister named Ruth, you don't even have a sister" then Talia said "umm, I think I'd better laeve" then Greg said "NO, Talia it's a mistake I love you!" then Talia said (while walking off) "sure, whatever!" then Greg said "Hey, Marv what was that about bro!?" then Marvin said "I know what you did last night" then Greg said "well... errr.. she wasen't a virgin so no biggie!" then Marvin said "I wasen't talking about that I was talking about the fact that YOU KILLED MY BROTHER!!!" then Greg said "what!?" then Marvin said "my brother Moe!, HE WAS AT THE PARTY LAST NIGHT AND YOU GOT HIM DRUNK" then Greg said "OOOHHH, that pip sqweek, what about him I made sure he got help... orr at least my girlfriend I forgot her name did" then Marvin said "well did you even think he was underage!?!?" then Greg said "yeah I did think about that... that was the fun of it!" then Marvin said "you don't even care about me!, we've known each other since kindergarden and you still don't give a DAM ABOUT ME OR MY FAMILY" then Greg said "HEY, when did I ever say I did!?" then Marvin said "ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS THOSE WHORES YOU PICK UP!, AND THE WORST PART IS THAT THERE NOT EVEN WHORES THERE PERFECTLY NORMAL GIRLS THAT YOU RUIN THERE LIVES AND NOW YOUR RUINING MINE!... well I've had enough" and Marvin started to walk off then Greg shouted out "NOBODY GIVES A FUCK ABOUT YOUR BROTHER MARVIN GROW UP YOUR SUCH A BABY" then Marvin who was allready trying to control his anger could'nt control it anymore and picked up a chair and threw it right at Greg without even giving it a thought then Greg got up and and picked up a vase and frew it and it smashed right on Marvin's head at that point Marvin was bleeding and more angry then he'd ever been and he ran right at Greg and gave him a massive blow right at Greg's nose which bled then Greg picked up a piece of brocken glass from the vase and cut deep into Marvin's arm with it then Greg tried to aim it at Marvin's face but Marvin hid behind a table at that very moment there was a loud bang but nether of them noticed as Greg jumped over the table and frew Marvin accross the room nockin' over peoples (who might I add were watching) meals and then Marvin went to get back up but he could'nt move a muscile in his body he was completly paralized...

 

 what will happen next? if you want to know comment and I will tell you when my next post is!

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On May 19th 2008 luvr81 Said :
luvr81 oooh ! kmp ! but this would really look ALOT better w/ some paragraphs