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Marvin's Life #2
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 Created on 5-14-08
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then Mikii said "thank you officer" and the cop said "I'm terably sorry" and Roy (Marvin's dad) lead the cop to the frount door Marvin walked past them and asked Mikki what happend but she was to upset to say a word then Roy came over and said "Mik why don't you go to sleep" then she nodded and went to the bedroom then Roy led Marvin to the living room and Marvin asked "what happend dad?" and Roy said "Moe died" then Marvin shocked said "but.. what happend?" then Roy said "he drank to much at that party and from that smell I think you should go to your room!" then Marvin said "No, I want to help or something!" then Roy said "YOU ALLREADY DID ANOUGH!"" then Marvin asked "what did I do?" then Roy said "YOU WERE THE ONE THAT WENT TO THE PARTY, YOU WERE THE ONE THAT SAID MOE WAS TO YOUNG, AND YOUR THE ONE WITH "FRIENDS" THAT IRISPONSIBLE!" then Marvin just ran off to his room he suddonly felt like his dad blamed him for the death of Moe he did'nt know what to do, he was so upset and confused and it was to much to take in he did'nt know how to stop the pain of the death he just desided to go to bed and hope that it will of changed in the morning he then had a dream of when he was only a little kid, he, his mum and his dad were at the movies buying popcorn they were going to see that movie he LOVED when he was that age he was jumping up and down he was so happy, they were about to go in the cinerma when his mum stopped and felt her stomic then said something to his dad, Marvin could'nt work out what she said but all of a suddon there was a panic and he was grabbed by his arm and taken to the car, then it all fadded out and they were in the hospital, Marvin and his dad were walking through to his mum who was holding a little baby he looked at it and it has SO small and little then the younger Marvin asked "where did that come from?" and his mum looked at him and smiled then said "the angels, you can see it in his big brown eyes!" Marvin then looked in Moe's eyes but Moe just staried at him, it freaked Marvin out so Marvin ran out of the room then sat in a chair he thought "I don't like that baby in there but mum and dad will be out here soon trying to cheer me up and leave the baby in there and hopefully forget about it" but Marvin waited there for hours and they never came so he crept up to the door and looked inside and saw his mum and dad making faces at the baby then everything went blurry again and then he was suddonly in the kitchen a couple years arfter that and he saw himself and Moe, Moe was in the high chair crying because he was thirsty then Marvin saw himself go to the cubbed under the sink and get out some dish washing diturgent and give it to Moe and Moe went to drink it but then Mikii came in and stopped Moe from drinking it, and sent Marvin to his room then everything went blurry again and then come into focus at school where he saw himself and Jennet talking Jennet was saying "look um.. Marvin I don't have any one to go to the dance with and well I was wondering... that is.. do you?" Marvin saw himself get so exited that the girl he had a crush on for years was about to ask him out then saw himself say "I don't" then Jennet say "well then we could go together?" then he saw himself overwelmed nodding his head as Jennet said "well then I'll see you there" then suddonly Moe came out of know where and said "did'nt you allready say you would go to the dance with Tressa Lewis!!" then Jennet say "oh.. I did'nt know you were going out with Tress! bye Marvin" and Jennet then walked off and he saw himself turn to Moe and say "WHY YOU LITTLE... ERR... I DON'T WANT TO GO OUT WITH TRESS!!" then Moe's eyes got so scared and got bigger in fear then Marvin saw himself give Moe a great big punch right in the stummic then walk off leaving Moe lieing on the ground crying and in pain then it faded out and faded back in but this time it was that night, he saw his mum, dad and Moe in the kitchenas his mum was saying "OK it's 2am that makes him two hours late, I hope nothing happend!" then his dad say "nothing happend he's ALLWAYS late, lets go to bed" then Moe say "well I could go to the party and see if I could find him!" then Mikkiii say "No, it's too late you should go to bed now" then Moe said "but I'm worried about Marvin, can I please go?" then Mikii say "No off to bed now Moe!" then Moe said "FINE" and walked down the hall to his room, Marvin followed him and saw him get into bed and toss and turn for a while then get out of bed and go to his draw then get out a picture of Marvin and him then moe said "I don't care what mum says, I wanna know what happend to my brother" then Moe opened his window climbed out and ran off then everything faded and then fadded back in at the party, Marvin saw himself leave drunk with Tress then saw his brother walk in the room and up to Greg and asked "have you seen Marvin?" then Greg say "yeah he was here but he left just now" then Moe say "good he must be on his way home then" then Greg say "hey kid you look thirsty would you like a drink?" then Moe said "well I am really firsty, OK" then Greg go and get some grog and give it to Moe then Moe took a sip and asked "what's in this?" then Greg say "just keep drinking, it's great once you've had a few!" then Marvin watched Moe keep drinking with Greg standing there watching then everything fadded out and it was morning so Marvin got out of bed and thought "what a wierd dream!?, and BOY does my head hurt" then he walked down the hal to Moe's room and opened the top draw and there lieing there on a pile of socks was a picture of him and Moe.
what happends next?, my last one wasen't populiar so if no one comments on this one I won't bother write the next, so please tell me if you like it
-Ash
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omfg loved it |
| On May 16th 2008 luvr81 Said : | |
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superb ! KMP ! |
