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Marvin's life 1

Drama Created on 5-11-08 Views(47) Story Rating G

there's a boy called Marvin he has longdark brown hair and is around 17 he live's with his family Roy his dad Mikii his mum, and his three brothers Mark, Mike and Moe,  he has a girlfriend called Tress one day he was at school when his best mate Greg came up "Yo!, Marv my main man, how's it hangin'" Marvin replied "good, are you comin' to the party tonight?" then Greg answerd "you know it!, I gotta go now, so I'll see you there?" then Marvin said "were else would I be?" then later Marvin was home in the kitchen with his mum and she said "are you going out tonight?" then marvin said "I don't know" then his mum said "well I want an answer, or you might not be allowed!" then Marvin said "allright theres some party on at Chuck's house, but it's allright no drugs or grog or anything!" then Mikii (his mum) said "well I don't like partys at night" then Marvin said "well if you had it your way I'd be playing pin the tail on the donkey" then Mikii asked "well do you have someone to go with?" then Marvin answerd "yeah someone" then Mikii said "answer the question!" then Marvin said "OK I'm going with Greg" then Mikkii said "Greg!?" almost laughing then Marvin said "He's a great guy once you know him, we get along well, can we please not start?" both of them did'nt relise Moe was listening in on them then Moe said "Cool!, can I come?, pleeeeeaase?" then Mikii and Marvin answerd at the same time "NO!" then Moe said "why?" then Mikii said "your fourteen, much to young for these kinds of partys!" then Moe said "know one understands me!" and marched of to his room as Marvin shouted down the hall at him "YOUR SUCH A BABY!" then Mikii said "Marvin!, if I was you I'd try to get on with Moe for once if you want to go to that party!" then Marvin said "well can I go?" then Mikkii said "well OK, but you have to be home before midnight!" then Moe was walking past them and said "yeah or that big head of yours will turn into a punkin... oops too late!" then Marvin said "you little... (reliseing Mikii was looking at him) errr fourteen year old" then Mikii nodded her head and walked off... later that night Marvin was at the party and was having the time of his life, then Greg came up to him and said "Yo!, Marv you have got to try this grog!" then Marvin said "n' thanks" then Greg said "com' on man it's ONE drink!, your not a party pooper are you?" then Marvin said "fine one drink!" and took a sip and said "this stuff is OK I like it!" then Greg said "told you!" then Marvin had another drink arfter that and met up with Tress (his girlfriend) and said "Yo!, Tress I did'nt know you were comin', but I'm glad you did!" then Tress went over and kissed him hello and said "what have you been drinking?" then Marvin said "I had a few, but you have GOT to try this!" then she said "I NEVER drink you know that!" then he said "Oh, come on!" then Tress said "NO!, you know I don't drink!" then Katie a really hot blonde and Gregs girlfriend came up and said "Hi!, Marvin, look Tress might not drink but I'm not a jerk like her!, I'll try some" then Tress not wanting to be out done by Katie said "I'll have some give that hear" and with that she downed the whole drink and said "WOW this stuff is GOOD!" then Marvin said "told ya!" then a couple hours later arfter a lot more drinks Marvin and Tress were drunk and were talking then Marvin said "you know what we should do!, I've always wanted to know what sex is like" then Tress said "really, me too... kinda" then Marvin said "I know a old warehouse we can go!" then Tress said "I'm game... I meen it's just one night we'll never look back on!" then marvin said "right!" so they went to the old warhouse and did it then Tress arfter getting her clouths back on said "well I'll walk home my house is just around the block" then Marvin said "OK I'll go home to" and then he walked home completly wasted and came home and went through the frount door were he saw his mother is tears and two policeman standing there.

 

 what will happen next?... you'll never guess but if you want me to post more please comment ( :

-Ash 

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On May 16th 2008 luvr81 Said :
luvr81 this is good but it just needs some proper paragraphing . so its not confusing. u should revise it, delete this one, and repost it again.
On May 11th 2008 warriors13rock Said :
warriors13rock love it
On May 11th 2008 Odyssey555 Said :
Odyssey555 just so you know this is animaniacAsh's storie she let me post for her, so I can earn some points