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Untrusted Love [23]

Romance Created on 10-28-07 Views(2666) Story Rating G

Nick started walking down the street faster. The water around his ankles was getting higher.

Allie looked down and started to worry. "Nick."

"Yea."

"The water is getting higher."

"Here." He said while putting her down. "Come on." He took her hand and started running.

"Nick, slow down. I can't see the ground!"

He looked back. He could barely see her, and she was standing right next to him. The rain was pouring down HARD.

"We have to get out of the rain, Nick!"

"Ok." The quickly went across the street and went into a store.

"There was a few people in there, getting out of the storm also.

"What's going on with the weather." One of the people asked another.

"I heard on the news a even bigger storm was going to come threw town." Another answered. "It's going to destory the place."

Allie walked behind Nick as he went to the back of the store with her.

"Nick, what's going to happen?"

He looked out the window then said, "I don't know. But it doesn't look good."

Soon it started to lightning and thunder, LOUD! The rain let up a little but was still pouring down hard.

"Stay here. I'll be right back." Nick said.

"Where are you going?"

"Just stay here."

Allie watched him walk away. She looked out the window and watched as the lightning sparked every few seconds.

"Excuse me Ms."

She looked around and saw a young man about Nick's age.

"Wow, hi." She said while looking at him and blushing.

He grinned a little then said, "I couldn't help but see that you were standing over here alone and I thought I would accompany you, if you don't mind."

"Oh, um.. sure." She smiled.

"What's your name?" He asked.

Just when she was about to say something, Nick came back with a cup in his hand.

"Here." He said while giving her the cup filled with strawberry slushie.

The young man looked at Nick, and Nick looked at him.

"Oh this is my friend. I should have mentioned I wasn't completly alone." She told him.

"Hi." Nick looked him up and down.

"Hi." He said in return.

He looked at Allie. "It was nice meeting you..." He started.

"Allie." She said.

"Allie, nice meeting you." He smiled then walked away.

Nick glared at her. "Who was that?"

"I don't know." She looked back out the window then started drinking some of the slushie.

"So, some random guy just comes up to you and says hi for now reseason?"

"Yes."

"Why?"

"Nick, I don't know, you tell me."

"How I would I know?"

"Because that's what you did when you met me."

Nick didn't say anything to her after that.

"All of a sudden you're quiet?" She asked.

 

 

I know, it's VERY short.
But I'm leaving to go some where.
So I'll write 24 soon.
Rate & Comment.
Thanks. =]

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On February 20th 2009 kaykayleilani Said: 
kaykayleilani haha she got him there
On June 11th 2008 LiaAmia Said: 
LiaAmia on 2 24 -lia
On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: 
xXPunkGirl09Xx Moreee I love reading this storryyy lol
On January 15th 2008 eldestgoddess Said: 
eldestgoddess KMP
On January 11th 2008 Daemion Said: 
Daemion it's too colloquial... and it's out of tense... tip one that my teachers have mindlessly repeated every year, "never write in past tense, Always present!" it actually does make it sound better
On January 8th 2008 greenytoo Said: 
my picture
keep me posted please.
On December 30th 2007 deshanna13 Said: 
deshanna13 this is GREAT!!!!
On November 20th 2007 7countrygirl7 Said: 
7countrygirl7 Yeah it is short, but at least there was some action! I wonder how the weather is going to turn out!?!?!
On November 10th 2007 Hudsonluv44 Said: 
Hudsonluv44 wow it was short but good, i like how she turns everything back to him it makes me giggle
On November 5th 2007 kj20078 Said: 
kj20078 i liked it very much! :)
On November 3rd 2007 blondechickx3 Said: 
blondechickx3 i love it. keep me posted please.
On November 2nd 2007 Sexyshawtie11 Said: 
Sexyshawtie11 i freakin loved it! keep me posted!!!!!
On November 2nd 2007 guardgirl22 Said: 
guardgirl22 love it!!!
On November 1st 2007 hippppoo101 Said: 
hippppoo101 aww i love it plz keep me posted if ya can
On November 1st 2007 whitneyleighh Said: 
whitneyleighh please keep me posted. i love it=]
On November 1st 2007 dbgrandom Said: 
dbgrandom keep me posted
On November 1st 2007 malaysianacces Said: 
malaysianacces jealousy-pure and clear. keep writing.
On October 31st 2007 dreamer2495 Said: 
dreamer2495 evil, evil, evil cliffhanger!!!!!!!! keep me posted
On October 31st 2007 dreamerdiz Said: 
dreamerdiz AWWWWIIIEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
On October 31st 2007 cashy31196 Said: 
cashy31196 keep me posted!
On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said: 
krislynn08 wow soo good cant wait for 24 keep me posted plz thnx
On October 30th 2007 Punkette40 Said: 
Punkette40 Aaahhhh I love it! But seriously, we need the next one, pronto. x] Keep me posted! :D
On October 30th 2007 amanda710faith Said: 
amanda710faith darn. not long enough lol i hope there is more in 24 =]
On October 30th 2007 mydragonlord Said: 
mydragonlord now that was nasty. lol leaving us hanging like that. please finish soon, please.
On October 29th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said: 
qosdfyjvwefayv ohhh i luhv it pweezzzz keep me posted =D