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Romance Created on 10-27-07 Views(1877) Story Rating G

"Stop it!" The teacher yelled while running to the back of the room.

Allie stood up and went to the other side of the class room to get away from the fight.

"Nick, stop it!" the teacher yelled again while trying to pull him off of Mark.

"No." He pushed the teacher aside and punched Mark harder and harder each time.

"Nick, stop." Allie yelled.

Mark tried pushing him off but couldn't. Nick had his legs locked so Mark couldn't get up.

The teacher ran out of the class room to go get help.

"Nick, stop you're going to get in more trouble!" Allie yelled.

Nick's friend, Adam, looked in the class room and saw what was happening. He rushed in and pulled Nick off of Mark and held him back.

"No." Nick yelled, trying to pull away from Adam and hurt Mark more. He looked like he had tears in his eyes, but it could have been sweat.

He was using all of his strength to try and get away from Adam to kick Mark's ass some more. But Adam had pulled Nick's hands behind his back so he was unable to do so.

"Adam, let go." Nick demanded.

Mark tried sitting up but he had pain in his chest and his nose wasn't feeling to good. It wasn't looking that good either.

He struggled to find his way to get up but just layed there with blood pouring out of his nose.

"I hope it's broken." Nick said. "I hope it is.."

"Shut up!" Mark yelled while holding his nose.

"Go to hell you basterd!" Nick yelled.

"Nick."

Nick looked over at Allie. She was shooken up by what she just saw.

Nick started to calm down but Adam didn't dare let him go.

A few minutes later, the teacher rushed back into the classroom with one other teacher.

They looked around and saw what had happened.

"Adam, make sure Nick gets to the office." One of the teachers demanded while walking over to Mark.

"Alright." Adam said while pulling Nick out of the room.

Nick stared at Allie while leaving the room. She had a worried look on her face.


Walking Down The Hall To The Office


"Nick, why'd you have to do this?" Adam asked while letting go of his arms.

"It was just something I had to do."

"Why?"

"Because."

"You realize that you're going to be suspended. You can't be caption of the football team now because of the foolish fights you get into."

"Look Adam!" Nick yelled. "I don't go looking for these fights. They just happen. Okay."

"They never used to happen, Nick. Ever since that girl came into your life, you've been different, you're not the same Nick I was friends with."

"That girl, is someone I care about, someone I'm in love with, Adam. If you can't understand that, then maybe we shouldn't even be friends."

"Fine, fuck your life up, I don't care." Adam said while walking away from him down the hall.

Nick walked to the office alone.


In The Class Room


"Don't move him." One of the teachers said.

The teachers went out of the class room to get the nurse.

"Allie." Mark said.

She moved her way over to him so he could see her.

"Are you okay?" He asked.

"Yes. I'm not the one who was beaten up."

"I know I just wanted to see if you were okay."

"Can we talk?" Allie said while sitting down beside him.

"Yea." He held his nose and turned his head to look at her.

"I'm not happy."

"Why, what's wrong?"

"Nothing, I'm not happy with you."

"What? What do you mean?" Mark asked.

"I want to break up with you."

"That's not possible."

"Yea it is, I just did, there for it's possible." She said while getting up.

"Why?" He asked.

"I found out that, I don't like you. Not only like that, I just don't like you at all."

"What do you mean?"

"I love someone else."

Mark stared at her. "Nick?"

She nodded her head then walked away.

"I hope you go to hell along with him." Mark laughed.

Allie walked to the door than turned around to look at Mark, laying there.. helpless on the floor.

She walked back over to him, "I finally have the chance to hurt you, the way you've hurt me. Watching you lay helpless here on the floor, makes me think about how much I would love to hurt you. I could take that chance, or I could let it pass me by." Allie said while staring down at him.

Mark looked up at her, worried.. wondering what she would do.

Knowing that she scared him with her words, she was saticsfied. She smiled then turned away. That's all she wanted, she wanted him to feel weak and helpless. She was through with him.

She walked out the door and down the halls that Nick went down. She found herself standing in front of the office doors. She stood there for awhile then backed away and leaned against the wall on the other side of the hall way. She slid down to the floor, sat.. and waited.

 

Nick sat down in a chair and waited for the principal to call him back into his office.

 

Allie was starting to get tired of waiting, it has been about 30 minutes. What could be taking so long?

"Nick, your actions are.. very strong to say the least. A teacher tells me you've beaten up a classmate of yours."

"Yes sir." Nick said with his head down low.

"She told me that you tackled him out of his seat and started punching him various times in the face."

"Yes sir."

"Do you realize that you might have broken his nose, possibely broken his ribs?!?!" He yelled.

Nick looked up at him. "Yes sir."

"Usually, since it's the begining of the year, I would give you a break, but after having a teacher to tell you to get off of him and then to have you push her aside, changes my mind a little, Nick!" He yells louder.

Allie could here the principal yelling at Nick. She stood up and walked back to her class, not wanting to hear anymore of it.

"Yes sir." Nick said.

"There for, you will not be able to try out for football..." He started.

"That's not fair! I'm only not aloud to be captain!" Nick yelled.

"Do not inturupted me!" He yelled in return.

"Sorry sir."

"You will not be trying out for football this season. You will not be able to join any sports or activities you wish to join this year, at all. Is that understood?"

"Yes sir."

"Good. You'll be suspended for a week."

"A week?"

"Yes! A week. Is that a problem?"

"No sir."

"Good. Now go see Ms. Cash. Make a phone call home." He demanded.

"Yes sir." Nick stood up and went into Ms. Cash's office and picked up the phone. He pretended to call home and acted like he was talking to his dad.

He hung up the phone then said that his dad would meet him outside the school.

He started walking towards the door to leave the office, but he was stopped by the principal.

"Here." He said while giving him a pink peice of paper.

"What's this?"

"This is to be signed by a parent and brought back after your suspention is over."

He took the papers from him then walked out the door while reading over them.

He walked back to the class room to see Allie once more. He stopped and peeked inside the class. Mark was still laying on the floor holding his nose. The nurse was filling his ribs to see if any places were painful to him when she touched him.

"Pssht!" Nick whisper when he saw Allie in the class room.

She looked up and saw Nick standing in the door way. He made hand movements for her to come over. She just shook her head, disagreeing with him then looked away.

He stared at her for awhile, then looked at Mark. He glared back at her, she was looking at him.

"Come here." He liped to her one more time.

"No." She liped back.

He looked at her one more time then walkked away, disapearing from her sight.

She walked over to the door and looked down the hall. He was walking towards the doors to leave the school. He looked back and saw that Allie was watching him. He turned all the way around and walked backwards, then shook his head and turned back around then went out the doors.

She went back in the class room and sat down in her desk and looked out the window.

 

Nick finally got to kick Mark's ass again. It felt amazing to get all of his anger out. He left the school property then road the city bus home. He went in his room, got out a sheet of paper and started writing.

A few minutes later, he had a note for Allie in his hands. He folded it up and put it in his back pocket. He left his house then made his way to Allie's house.

School wasn't out yet and he hoped her parents wouldn't be home. He walked onto the porch and looked in one of the windows, everything looked peacful and quiet inside. He knocked on the door then quickly ran behind a bush.

He waited about 15 minutes. No one came to the door. Which probably meant, no one was home yet.

He went back on the porch and looked inside again. It still looked peacful. He went to the back of the house and opened a window that lead into the kitchen. He fell in and landed hard on the floor, hurting his shoulder.

He got up and went up stairs to Allie's room. He looked around for a place he could put the note. Under her pillow would be to advoice. In her drawer? No, she'd probably never find it.

He sat down on her bed and thought about where to put it. He had to think fast though because school was being dismissed at about this time. And he had no clue when Allie's parents were going to be home.

He stood up and walked over to her closet. Something caught his eye. A shirt, not just any shirt.. his shirt. He grinned and thought about how silly it was of her to keep that shirt, and how sweet it was.

He walked over to her desk and saw a few papers on it. He put the note under the first peice of paper. Just when he was about to walk out of Allie's room, he heard someone walk into the house and close the front door.

His heart started racing. He ran to her closet whispering, "Oh shit shit shit shit shit."

He hid in the back under some of Allie's clothes, waited and listened quietly.

He heard someone coming up the stairs, then walk into the room. He peeked out of the closest a little to see who it was.

It was Allie. She had came in, threw her bag on the floor and layed on her bed with her face in her pillow. Nick watched her carefully. He began to hear little crys comeing from her. She was crying. Nick wanted to comfort her, but she would get pissed if she knew he was in her house, yet alone in her room.

He broke into her house, he could never let her find this out. He sat there in her closet helplessly watching the girl he loved cry, and not being able to do anything about it to make her feel better.

Almost a half an hour past and she stopped crying. He watched as she layed there. Wondering if she was awake, or asleep. This was a difficult choice he was going to make. So he decided to quietly get up out of the closet and try to leave her house before she ever found out he was there.

He succesfully made it out of her closet. He stood in the middle of her room and watched her. He walked to the other side and peeked over her shoulder, she was sleeping.

He grabbed the blanket off the end of her bed and gently placed it on top of her just incase she were to get cold.

He stood over her bed side for a few minutes, then left her room and hurried down the stairs. He went into the kitchen and shut the window he came in. He went to the front door, quietly opened it, then shut it behind him.

He walked out of Allie's street then walked down to the beach and sat in the sand and waited.

 

 

I'll try to write more today or maybe tonight.
If not, then I'll try to get part 22 out tomorrow.
Rate & Comment Please.

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On June 9th 2008 LiaAmia Said :
LiaAmia i hope she sees the note he left -lia
On March 19th 2008 hiphuney420 Said :
hiphuney420 man this is like the notebook in a way i cant stop readin it
On March 1st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Aw sweet that she still keep his shirt aw they love each other.
On February 5th 2008 hellshelper Said :
hellshelper eric101106- love it its great no its not...
On January 15th 2008 eldestgoddess Said :
eldestgoddess Please say they get back together.
On December 30th 2007 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 aww
On December 13th 2007 punkgurl989 Said :
my picture
aaawww how sweet
On November 20th 2007 7countrygirl7 Said :
7countrygirl7 Awwww... I hope 22 is going to be great!
On November 10th 2007 Hudsonluv44 Said :
Hudsonluv44 aww i want them to get together so bad, i love this story soo much!!!!!
On November 1st 2007 malaysianacces Said :
malaysianacces sweet n cute..keep me posted,k?thnx.
On October 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 awwwwww!!! poor Allie
On October 29th 2007 demonica666 Said :
demonica666 YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY i just know there gonna get back together
On October 29th 2007 comacozi101 Said :
comacozi101 luv it keep me posted
On October 28th 2007 Lemonkiss7 Said :
Lemonkiss7 Wow awesome! plz keep me posted!
On October 28th 2007 eric101106 Said :
eric101106 love it its great
On October 28th 2007 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 awwwwww keep me posted!!
On October 28th 2007 lilangelofgod Said :
lilangelofgod AWW i love it =) keep me posted
On October 28th 2007 Nyyia Said :
Nyyia i liked it keep me posted.
On October 28th 2007 EvilRaven9892 Said :
EvilRaven9892 I love it, keep it up!
On October 27th 2007 sccrchick36 Said :
sccrchick36 love it, plz keep me posted
On October 27th 2007 brittnee86 Said :
brittnee86 Your story line is great, you have a talent for that. :) But... I must say that your writing style, grammar, and spelling could use a little work. There is more to writing a story than just a great story. But you've obviously got raw talent. :) can't wait to hear what comes next
On October 27th 2007 necrosiss Said :
necrosiss yayyyyy for nick getting to kick mark's ass. =]=] keep me posted!
On October 27th 2007 cheerwine14352 Said :
cheerwine14352 aw I can't wait until 22 is up! Keep me posted.I am so glad that Mark got what he deserved =]
On October 27th 2007 lilprincess122 Said :
lilprincess122 O_O i love it, more plz! keep me posted! thanx!
On October 27th 2007 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz this is so good.. =] i love it.